Jen Somerfield wrote:
Yes please

Very artistic port.

few  artistic nude eye catchers
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22647924
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23253037
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23253028

nice but too bright for my taste.
You may want to add more formal portraits and fashion shots.
my fav
you look great

Luke Lenz wrote:
I'm in.

Phenomenal dedication shown.

I like your dedication to latex leather and pvc
first review was here
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15294109
I felt that I could add some more to the initial review as I saw some more picture additions

in fetish genre this is one of your your strongest statement https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19953634
I like this a lot listed.
you are cropping your leg shots too tight like those , message is lost.
great shot, one of your bests

Not so crazy about your vampire shots
I like that type of shots taken in their natural habitat like graveyards and castles.

You have great skills in general, and your erotic fetish statements are well received in most photos however some vaginal to your face nudity shift the focus away from fetish fashion.
Keep it up, not a Ken Marcus level yet but on its way hopefully soon

KBSTUDIO wrote:
Ooooh, I want a critique!!

your beauty shots, have  a nice glow
few eye catchers in your port
besides the portraits your port feels feels more like skin mag because the style and themes are mostly the same.
I would suggest you work more on lighting and add sophistication to model's looks and carefully manage poses to show their most flattering angles.

M Clements wrote:
Meeeeee!

Hello
All of your portfolio is studio shots and I am affraid subjects do not stand out well and they blend in with the monotone background.
the contrast is low and the light uniform
Your strongest picture is https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21575294
Nothing else much grabbed my attention

varton wrote:

OK I read this below in your profile
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I’m engaged in producing a series of images that are an exploration of the meaning of the erotic impulse and identity: how it can be depicted and what its role is in the creation and spread of images. It is an investigation, examination and dissection of the often obscured and hidden aspects of existence. There's something about stripping away behaviors and symbols of everyday life that allow for the emergence something at once more exalted and essential.
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I think you are achieving your goal well.
I am an old school, I love and appreciate your work because no matter how you create an image it involves skill talent and savoir faire.
this is the one I like most
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22765452 listed

Thanks so much, and yes, I'm also rather old school, it's a film image.

Focus Photography  LLc wrote:
i would love to know

your images are outstanding. I feel your distinct style and taste in all your photos. Outstanding light framing and cropping is common to all.
Your strongest is gorgeous eye contact.
your best , boldly beautiful, listed
you have great talent
and it shows.

varton wrote:

hmm fantasy art
love it,
you cater to a specific niche market.
I admire doped edited and manipulated photos
It is not my cup of tea, I will only tell you what strikes a chord with me:
some of your best

this is listed, just gorgeous

this one below is too tacky for my taste
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20229847

In general I find your work very beautiful, you are talented and very  creative.

Thanks for the feedback and the list! The one you liked the least was the only one I didnt edit in my port  
Thanks again! Your port is just amazing, I am commenting on some of the photos right now.

varton wrote:

Very artistic port.

few  artistic nude eye catchers
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22647924
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23253037
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23253028

nice but too bright for my taste.
You may want to add more formal portraits and fashion shots.
my fav
you look great

Thank you very much! J x

Kendra Spring Adams wrote:
I'm interested in your thoughts. 

Hello Kendra
this one jumps out immediately love your face expressions.
You are beautiful and your port is stellar.
I prefer long hair on you.
your vintage boudoirs and pinups are outstanding
you look and emulate Ms. Monroe/ Norma Jean very well
after seeing all your femme fatale pics I am unable to get used to tomboy looks like this
It was a pleasure to visit your port.
It is well balanced, gorgeous all over the port, and flawless in many ways. All pics except the last one is listed.
Keep up the great work you do.
Great job A+ for everything.

BNS III Photography wrote:
still going? how bout mine? i need to update to some new stuff when i take some

you don't have many pics but I see some interesting work on your port,
I love this a lot listed. Great colors light and mood, post brushing is nice too.
like your vision and spontaneity in your pics.
It would be a good idea to add indoor shots and show studio lighting skills as well.
Great job and very much promising

Angel Celeste wrote:
Interested.

Hello Angel
you have this foxy lady look, I like a lot. However avoid excessive make up as in this
Like the artistic poses great mood there
the quality could be better but you still look good.
Keep it up delete those as they are either redundant or weak
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23475970
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23476557
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20834796

gorgeous look, Great potential. Make sure you don't pose always the same way, because in some pictures you look absent or distracted.
Keep it up. You need to find a good local thog and fix this port asap.

Gaita wrote:
Please?

You have a nice port, excellent looks and cute posing

this is probably your best but the feet is cut off.

avoid wide angle closeups and very big smiles exposing too much gums

this is my fav
keep up the good work looks good in general

Sunny Foto wrote:
ok, do me.

you are a very good lens, love your portraits but preferred less brushing
in this the light on her face is meh otherwise it was a great pose with beautiful styling.
nice, she looks more like a mannequin.
your best but lost some detail around her lips due to post work
my fav great expression
in this one the light streaks on her hair is really bad . It does not achieve the effect you think it would have achieved. It grabs the attention and shift focus. (therefore I disagree with the comments posted there)
listed
keep it up, some great pics in your port but some others weakening and off setting its impact.

Miss PJ wrote:
i wanna play

hello Ms. PJ
you look great on the runaway
few more eye catchers
my fav love the styling looks great listed

your best
no need for this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#23043092
better pose alone in your port pics.

great beautiful hourglass shape beautiful face, love your poses and
you will do great

Annalise Blackwood wrote:
Me pretty please!!

I am fascinated by this but would love to see you wearing a different outfit.
The violon is hiding your figure.
this is your best my fav listed.
I like most of your photos, but you might want to add also beauty boudoirs, delete few outdoor pics that are weak and consider doing more fashion and alt goth style.
love your figure very beautiful.
You will do great

Danni H wrote:
could you on me please

you have an awesome and functional port.
I like your look
several eye catchers like this gorgeous
profile
very cute love your hair in this and yellow tights. listed
Excellent look here listed
gorgeous figure in this my fav your best listed
your posture and posing skills are excellent. You have the look
keep it up doing great.

Robert Sleeper wrote:
me please...   :-)

Robert, I have nothing but compliments for you.
You manage to capture the best of your models
you have vision and talent
It is hard to choose your best to list as your work is interesting, diverse and flawless in general technically and emotionally.
as I scrolled down I found this very first eye catcher
I feel it is beautiful shot and tells a story
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#20243647
(the small statue is sitting just like her and it is not a surprise )
another great one listed
your nude work is also awesome. Your headshots are not boring.
Your light is always on the target.
work more on model expression in duo shoots
nurture sensuality and avoid void expressions or boredom in some of your pics like the ones below:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23384775
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22924765
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22642991
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20243674


Keep it up great port and talent

GingerBedlam wrote:
I haven't played this game in far too long.

Edit:  You've already gone through my port and commented, so I guess that I have my answer.

You are like a treasure cove, that need to be explored and discovered
again and again

you have an amazing look, very bold and beautiful.

this is the strongest statement in your port. listed.
keep it up, you may want to expand by adding looks other then fetish just not to limit your target markets.
all my best to you

Danielle Sheridan wrote:
I would love to get your feedback! Also, I think its great how you're helping others! Thank you!

I wished they helped themselves and visit the thread to check my comments once in a while.
I don't see the evidence of that except a few, quite frankly.
I have a dozen or so to do before you.
stayed tuned