varton wrote:

Gregory votre travail c'est magnifique
Great job overall, I am in love with your bw nature shoots, https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23152979 where models are only a garnish. Listed as best of bests.
You are very talented and I had hard time to pick a best, as all photos are beautiful.
This is my fav and one of your very best https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23232474
your color pics are very well saturated, love them
this is my fav as well https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23222039
keep clicking  super fantastic job.

Thank you for your critique. I appreciate the feedback.

Regards,

Gregory

Belle Retouch wrote:
I love this idea!

I'm not sure if you critique retoucher ports, but I'd like to know what you think of mine.
Be harsh! hah

No I don't like to critique retouchers.
I am just mere mortal thog
you guys are Gods
I can tell you only what I like or what I don't.
I really don't like doped photos brushed up to the ying yang
in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22590368 I prefer un retouch, she looks healthier
very nice but love her freckles too
probably your best work
keep it up, great job as expected.
You see in your job, you can't be bad, you gotta be great so you can save thogs LOL

Irina Dmitriyev wrote:
Me?

you are queued up
and as my time permits
I do them all
check back soon pls

Kimberly M Art wrote:
Me? Would love to get feedback

Wow, Malta
I always wanted to go there
not so crazy about this I like human looking models  I am old school.
one of your best here like the mystery and the nice glow that provides it.
good job
my God you pulled this off so well, only you should get paid for this.
You do good job but, hey, you are supposed to.
We are mere mortal photographers. Just like some models would make any thog look good, some retouchers also make any thog look good.
Keep up the good work.
excellent

Maximilian Studios wrote:
I'm in ^_^

if you checked the first page index you would not double dip.

check page 14
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15253651

Jenna_Wilson wrote:
I know I'm extremely new to this (2-3 months now), but any constructive criticism would be appreciated. Most everyone holds more weight than I do on the modeling subject both behind and in front of the lens. Any comments or advice would be greatly appreciated.

you have a fabulous look
This is the most dramatic sepia shot listed
not so many photos but what you have is enough

absolutely drop dead gorgeous figure
this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23459073 is not much strong, flat light and low contrast. Love your ink but don't add no more.
keep it up.
stunning look.

JAE Photography PA wrote:
I'll play.  I'm still new mostly so anything you want to throw at me that helps would be appreciated

Nice creative work. I will just point to this as best and skip the boring seamless paper shots
Love the latex fetishwear stuff you got in your port
like listed
this is nice too but not as strong as the first one.
your lighting is very good
as shown here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21123149
this is the best of all the seated naked ladies https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23093051
you are doing great, just be careful in framing and sweet spots.
also some light in outdoors is weak like in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22876689
keep clicking, great ideas and eye for beauty

Sarah Mariie wrote:
im curious:] still learning, but curious :]

Hello sarah,
nice varied looks but you are currently unable to break away from the (gorgeous) girl next door type. Except in this very glamorous, my fav and your best look, listed.
Another great one listed, super mood here and lighting.
Pay attention to your angles and loose high waist garments, they will make you look fat. e.g. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23047099
don't like much the photo but you look gorgeous in this, super teasy.
Love your look. Some shots could do better in face book or myspace
like:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15845876
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16703066
keep it up, cherry pick photographers

Irina Dmitriyev wrote:
Me?

Lovely port, not earth shattering but it will do the job at least to start something rolling.
I listed this because I like this playful gaze down on your shoulder.
Your ink is nice, don't overdo it if you do not want to slide suddenly to the alt model type.
lovely figure and this is a sure eye catcher but I prefer this angle , beautiful shot.
Your portraits are weak because the light is failing to create the intended mood.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23393440
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23393514
your expressions are boring.
I love your urban beauty looks better.
again high cut waist dresses posed in front of dull backgrounds will show you fat.
can be removed.
seating and fold back positions will suffer of the same fate like this
I love this one nonchalent, sexy pose.
Work on face expressions, show personality and attitude, do not settle down as the nice girl next door.
You need to watch your angles. lovely sexy look.
Add sophisticated boudoir pictures, in vintage foundations and hair make up styles.
You can be transformed into a femme fatale with little effort.

Altamash Urooj Santana wrote:
Are you doing only photos on MM or a more expansive view ?

Please try mine ! And if you want to go further you are welcome
to check out my website at http://www.altamashurooj.com

as it's not updated, another place where I upload photos is my fb fanpage at http://facebook.com/altamashurooj

looking forward to it !

You are in Dubai huh good for you 
for me just doing the MM is already a colossal task.
anyway let's get started, this is an eye catchergorgeous fashion shot.
you don't have too many pics but perhaps less is more, I see talent and creativity.
Some of your lighting is too abstract for me.
Other then this kind of contrast and light and the one above, I am not much interested in anything else in your port.
Keep it up, you may want to add some regional ethnic garbed fashion shoots.
That would show versatility and cater to more tastes.

FFP Photography wrote:
I'd love for you to give me some feedback...

hmm fantasy art
love it,
you cater to a specific niche market.
I admire doped edited and manipulated photos
It is not my cup of tea, I will only tell you what strikes a chord with me:
some of your best

this is listed, just gorgeous

this one below is too tacky for my taste
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20229847

In general I find your work very beautiful, you are talented and very  creative.

Nadine Brennan wrote:
I'd love a review(: Thanks!

Hello Nadine

you are gorgeous and the first eye catcher but I am not sure what is the fascination with the umbrella. It takes focus away from you.
this is a strong concept great mood but I am not happy with the light.
in this please avoid Deer in headlights posture and eye contact with camera
in this nice BW but you are absent, look a bit bored.
Oh you see this a lot better
in this you look lovely but the image failed. Miss details low contrast and suffers of flat light.
This is soo spooky listing in my goose bump list.
I love your generous curves.
your outdoor shoots are weak. Try to pose with more attitude, be the subject, not the part of the landscape.
but you are very beautiful, and you will do just fine.

AshleyHope wrote:
I wanna play too!

Ashley, you seem to be a bubbly fun person
I love this tease very much https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23454241 listed.

I like your glamour boudoirs and I love this, the best

the other one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13772910
you should remove
why because the elastic stocking tops is squeezing and bulging your thighs
not a good sight to see. also the shoot angle makes you look fat.

this one also can be deleted https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23442821 shows you big
keep it up, try some fashion shoots to expand the port.
this should be air brushed or liquified or whatever
this not bad but can hardly see that earth shattering make up as stipulated
this is your best look too small to list and light is uniform.

You look gorgeous but cherry pick your photographers.

varton wrote:

You are totally awesome for an amateur model.
I like very much this style  on your port.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21934416
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21165089
great artistic renderings.
but I prefer you like this
you have a very busy ink https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20367650
and https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20461095
this is your best
I guess piercings were photoshopped
and this my fav.
I am sure you are doing great with gore goth and fetish genres
gorgeous port catering to some limited markets.

Thank you for that.
My ink is definitely busy-looking, but that's mostly because it's not done, I think.

GingerBedlam wrote:
I haven't played this game in far too long.

Edit:  You've already gone through my port and commented, so I guess that I have my answer.

I will tell you more about it in detail as soon as your turn comes up.

Jacqueline Hoffman wrote:
oh me, please please.

hmm lovely look
I dig this
I can not find a strong picture
you look all cute in them
this may be your best in the bunch but too tightly cropped.
Nothing to list
besides you don't need advice
you say in your profile
3 simple things:
I don't shoot nude. (yes, I do implied.)
I may bring an escort.
I do not pay photographers.
looks like everything is squared there.

Irina Dmitriyev wrote:
Me?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15530949