Mike Williams Photo wrote:
I was learning a lot from critiques like these but got my mouth ripped (unfairly so in my opinion) out yesterday so I am afraid to venture out again. Oh, what the hell. Give it a go. Welcome to check out the whole port if you feel like it.

NoT a fan.. Rail road tracks and cowboy boots are OVERPLAYED

I hate the concept but it appears all the technical aspects look pretty good.

CEE Productions wrote:
Mine

I loveeeeeee your work!

this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!

AJ_Photography wrote:
Would appreciate your thoughts

i like the concept but this photo is just entirely too soft..and perhaps its your style but her face look way to light and flat

Rachel Reilly wrote:

I loveeeeeee your work!

this shot is so good! i love the wardrobe and thehead piece, i like how you kept her make up relatively soft and i like how you left the negative space at the top!
the only critique i would say is maybe another shot where her body is a bit more separated like legs and arms. but perhaps that was the look you were going for, either way Well done!

:OOO Thank you so much!
I do have some others like this one where it's more separated! I appreciate the feedback

CEE Productions wrote:

:OOO Thank you so much!
I do have some others like this one where it's more separated! I appreciate the feedback

Ceci L wrote:

photo 1: NOOOOOOOO
its trash.
not focused properly, and too much noise. Your eyes look and your facial expression/pose are not flattering.

photo2: much better! i like this photo, however i think it would be better if you were looking at the camera in a sultry way. Hate your expression as well!

Lone Pine Photography wrote:

photo 1: her leg is up really high for a bridal photo like kinda of inapropriate haha
other than that i dont have much experience critiquing wedding photos. its a bit under exposed as well

photo 2: i hate it. its a cheesy concept and it wasnt executed well.

Scotty2191 wrote:
Me please? New to this model melarky.

work with better photographers and get a decent hair cut.

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#31632466 18+

not a fan Jorge!!

i understand this is not conventional but the biggest problem i have with it is its way too under exposed and i wish it was a tab more polished

RachelReilly wrote:

not a fan Jorge!!

i understand this is not conventional but the biggest problem i have with it is its way too under exposed and i wish it was a tab more polished

All your children can't be winners.

Jorge Kreimer wrote:

All your children can't be winners.

True!
Haha.. I understand you're just experimenting and playing around and that's how some of the best art is made!

janine cockerham wrote:
hi
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31106738

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31491635

Thanks

1- Not a terrible photo..your dress is blending into whatever you're laying on too much and the angle is a bit weird.
2- the terrible , looks amateur. Bad lighting , bad pose, bad expression, bad angle.

Randall_Oelerich wrote:
Critique appreciated / welcome.

I don't get this. It's not attractive and it's flat.
Hair in the face isn't working

Art of V wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31647871
Thank you

Not a bad photo.. Kinda boring though And where's her face?
Nice lighting.

zssphotography wrote:

Bad photoshop on the second image.

Henry Carmona wrote:
Thank you for your help.

I mean there's nothing really wrong with this technically, hate the crop and the sepia.
The whole pose and expression looks super cheesy.

Victoria Comeau wrote:
Hi! Here are a couple of photos for your consideration

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30101009

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30104618

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31621769

Thank you!

The middle one in my opinion is the best but you REALLLY need to work on your facial expressions. You look as if you don't care to try and you look super boring in all if these. The other two are just terrible on your part expression and pose an on the photographers part technically and cropping

Mae West wrote:
I'm very new and learning my way. Wouldn't mind an honest impression.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31656085


Thank you.

Ok not bad .. You caught her off guard fixing her hair ?
And it looks so.. Not terribly flattering and her hands look weird and are cropped oddly  :-/
The model still looks good and I like your black and white , good job. But is that selective color in her eyes? Lose it! It's amateur looking.
Good start so far though

sensual light studios wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31698384

I do not like this crop, flat lighting, and pose/expression are not flattering!