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Model

Magdalena Magi

Posts: 10

London, England, United Kingdom

Thank you very much for your opinion the complements and critique. I am really pleased that you have listed that because of me.wink  thanks again, wink x

May 09 11 06:15 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Rachael Bueckert wrote:
Me please? smile

Rachael, I enjoyed visiting your port. You look gorgeous in all your photos, and I had hard time to pick a best. In any case this is very lovely https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101005/15/4caba6468f118_m.jpg gorgeous style.
This is your best https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/14/4dc319de363de_m.jpg listed.
This is your sexiest https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/15/4dc31eb89029d_m.jpg listed
This is your most fun   https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/15/4dc31eebca719_m.jpg like your short hair.
keep it up, you are stunning and would make any photographer shine.

May 09 11 10:04 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

pxspace wrote:
< me? smile

Your work is impressive.
I like this one the best https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110324/19/4d8bfa7d6aeec_m.jpg listed
this is also a gorgeous eye catcherhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110429/09/4dbae700ea196_m.jpg
You are very good wink

May 09 11 10:09 am Link

Retoucher

MM020

Posts: 1046

Braşov, Braşov, Romania

Thank you very much smile
You have a great port!

May 09 11 10:16 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

2413 Studios wrote:
Please have a look, and thanks in advance big_smile

Being in Hawaii puts you in tremendous advantage as far as weather and naturally beautiful backgrounds but I am a bit disappointed as your beach shots look nice but miss eye candy or excitement. I expected to see much hotter poses, tanned oiled and a more daring style.
I love this bw https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100619/00/4c1c6d469c90a_m.jpg great job. Listed.
Indoor glamours are a bit flat in expression and lighting.
I like your bw low key nudes like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19151016 +18

May 09 11 10:31 am Link

Model

ClaireUK

Posts: 417

Bideford, England, United Kingdom

I would love to know if you are happy to carry on! smile

May 09 11 10:33 am Link

Model

Miss November71

Posts: 238

Nanaimo, British Columbia, Canada

Yes please! smile

May 09 11 10:50 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Amandine Camporro wrote:
Yes please, it's been a while while while.

Bonjour Amandine,
Votre profil est très intéressant et  j’aime bien votre travail et la façon dont vous vous exprimez dans vos photos.
Vous étés énergétique et peux ordinaire, avec des poses articulées comme celle-la https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19647224 +18 et j’avoue que j’aime ce que je vois.
C’était un peu difficile de choisir mais j’adore celle là https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100826/11/4c76b4a8708e8_m.jpg listée.
Vos carrées nues sont extraordinaire comme celle-ci https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16944538 +18 listée

Celle la est du très bon travail
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100313/03/4b9b7c6b206d7_m.jpg et  un bel aperçu de votre coté lugubre ou malsain : )
Mais celle-la est votre meilleur https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100914/17/4c900db350c57_m.jpg et ma favorite.
J’adore votre beauté. Vous êtes très capable. Bonne chance à vous et bon courage.

May 09 11 11:00 am Link

Model

Marta Schwarz

Posts: 164

Orlando, Florida, US

Me?

May 09 11 11:04 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Matt MacDonald wrote:
I would appreciate any and all feedback!

Matt your investment in your body will pay off.
Great six pack and very handsome look.
my fav and your best look https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101213/09/4d065b2eefe3d_m.jpg
listed.

May 09 11 11:06 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Brandon Ralph wrote:
I'd like to know thanks!

Brandon

Like your many faces from boytoy to tough guy.
Love your look in this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110415/07/4da857261d1bd_m.jpg my fav and listed
great biceps in this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22554766 wink
you are doing good keep it up.

May 09 11 11:13 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

ClaireUK wrote:
I would love to know if you are happy to carry on! smile

Always happy to carry on as my time permits. wink
But I am especially motivated when some one as beautiful as you asks for my opinion.
I can tell you in a heart beat you have a gorgeous look and an amazing port.
Your beauty shots are spot on like this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110424/12/4db475629d3fa_m.jpg (listed)
you are fun and witty, https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090802/14/4a7603373f290_m.jpg (listed) and would have been a blast for me to transform you into a perfect pinup.
Your nude photos radiate sensuality
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13577496 +18
and your assets are overwhelming https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13577539 +18
my favorite https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22693328  +18 listed
I wish you good luck and success in your modeling. Great job. smile

May 09 11 11:33 am Link

Model

ClaireUK

Posts: 417

Bideford, England, United Kingdom

varton wrote:

Always happy to carry on as my time permits. wink
But I am especially motivated when some one as beautiful as you asks for my opinion.
I can tell you in a heart beat you have a gorgeous look and an amazing port.
Your beauty shots are spot on like this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110424/12/4db475629d3fa_m.jpg (listed)
you are fun and witty, https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090802/14/4a7603373f290_m.jpg (listed) and would have been a blast for me to transform you into a perfect pinup.
Your nude photos radiate sensuality
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13577496 +18
and your assets are overwhelming https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13577539 +18
my favorite https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22693328  +18 listed
I wish you good luck and success in your modeling. Great job. smile

Wow, thank you so much! really really appreciated! smile

May 09 11 11:37 am Link

Photographer

Rob Churney

Posts: 3

Koloa, Hawaii, US

varton wrote:
Being in Hawaii puts you in tremendous advantage as far as weather and naturally beautiful backgrounds but I am a bit disappointed as your beach shots look nice but miss eye candy or excitement. I expected to see much hotter poses, tanned oiled and a more daring style.
I love this bw https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100619/00/4c1c6d469c90a_m.jpg great job. Listed.
Indoor glamours are a bit flat in expression and lighting.
I like your bw low key nudes like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19151016 +18

Thanks Varton big_smile

May 09 11 11:59 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Miss November71 wrote:
Yes please! smile

Kellie, you are hot, and a very savvy woman.
I love your nonchalant attitude in front of the camera

you have some great pics and poses in your port.
love the style in thishttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110104/18/4d23d44b6e895_m.jpg but I am not much crazy about the location.
and this is great as wellhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110201/20/4d48d9c1bdbbf_m.jpg
This is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110104/18/4d23d4a7351ac_m.jpg (listed) and one of your very best looks.
Good luck with your modeling.

May 09 11 12:01 pm Link

Model

Miss November71

Posts: 238

Nanaimo, British Columbia, Canada

varton wrote:

Kellie, you are hot, and a very savvy woman.
I love your nonchalant attitude in front of the camera

you have some great pics and poses in your port.
love the style in thishttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110104/18/4d23d44b6e895_m.jpg but I am not much crazy about the location.
and this is great as wellhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110201/20/4d48d9c1bdbbf_m.jpg
This is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110104/18/4d23d4a7351ac_m.jpg (listed) and one of your very best looks.
Good luck with your modeling.

Thanks so much and for listing one of my photos!!! smile

May 09 11 03:49 pm Link

Photographer

Rebecca Christine

Posts: 7074

London, England, United Kingdom

Yes, please?

May 09 11 03:54 pm Link

Photographer

Rhiannon Jansma

Posts: 71

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

I would love to hear your opinion smile

May 09 11 03:58 pm Link

Model

Tiffany Crystal

Posts: 208

Los Angeles, California, US

I also would like to know what your opinion is! Thank you.

May 09 11 07:25 pm Link

Photographer

CJ_Photography

Posts: 5

Plano, Texas, US

I'd love to get your feedback smile

May 09 11 09:07 pm Link

Model

Mrs Nancy H

Posts: 40

Zaanstad, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Can i play to?

May 10 11 12:38 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

RebeccaChristine wrote:
Yes, please?

hello Rebecca
you do some awesome bw work, I love it.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110215/10/4d5aca55a5ee1_m.jpg listed
awesome lighting here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101003/00/4ca82b6db6d7f_m.jpg listed
keep it up, good luck

May 10 11 04:30 am Link

Photographer

Rebecca Christine

Posts: 7074

London, England, United Kingdom

varton wrote:

hello Rebecca
you do some awesome bw work, I love it.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110215/10/4d5aca55a5ee1_m.jpg listed
awesome lighting here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101003/00/4ca82b6db6d7f_m.jpg listed
keep it up, good luck

Thanks smile and thanks for the lists!

May 10 11 04:37 am Link

Photographer

JATERO

Posts: 56

London, England, United Kingdom

Oh.. I am game smile

May 10 11 05:01 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Marta Schwarz wrote:
Me?

Don't think I skipped you wink
as per profile you may be a beginner model but you posture is very good in some photos
you can lose this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22869062 - a bad pose
this one is my fav with your killer heels.https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110509/05/4dc7e2f9e01d3_m.jpg

I am not so crazy about this one, https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22923293 not much of a flattering pose for your legs.

Show your personality and pose with attitude. Avoid expressionless faces. They only belong to runway.

May 10 11 06:33 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Rhiannon Jansma wrote:
I would love to hear your opinion smile

I commented on your work previously many moons ago on page 16

https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15259770

May 10 11 06:39 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

T Crystal wrote:
I also would like to know what your opinion is! Thank you.

You are absolutely gorgeous
in this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110111/22/4d2d46f43ab83_m.jpg don't like reflection of the flash in your eyes, otherwise could list it.
Very nice tease here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21576120
and wished you to be more daring.
love this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101021/23/4cc134826deef_m.jpg with men's dress shirt boudoir. smile listed
in general your glamor shoots are not strong
this is great pose https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100527/07/4bfe81e772f82_m.jpg but face is a bit burn and you do not have a playful attitude.
Try to be more daring and show personality and attitude in front of the camera. Do not stare at the camera, talk to it wink in some photos you seem like very bored or not into what you are doing.
you'll be fine.

May 10 11 06:54 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

CJ_Photography wrote:
I'd love to get your feedback smile

Hello there
Only few shots in your port. Some really should go to your face book pages.  Your best is https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/21/4dc37d01c5da4_m.jpg and my fav, the lighting and the snake are on the spot smile  listed
however I am not so crazy about all the others
e.g https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22878734 +18 the pose is good lighting is not so terrible but cropping is bad, just like the Mustang pic.
Try to plan your shoots in advance. Point and shoot style is what you want to avoid.

May 10 11 07:04 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Lady Lovebug wrote:
Can i play to?

You have an interesting look.
Love this pinup  A LOT https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110313/21/4d7d94a08b9e2_m.jpg Listed.
Like this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110510/00/4dc8efecaefeb_m.jpg but it would have been more sensual with close lips.
creative post work here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110312/08/4d7b9ad0c0d86_m.jpg
overall good enough port for alt style modeling and showing flexibility in few other genres. Keep it up. wink

May 10 11 07:18 am Link

Model

JenniferRuthMartin

Posts: 20

Derby, England, United Kingdom

I'm very new and would like some feedback smile

May 10 11 07:21 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

JATERO wrote:
Oh.. I am game smile

Hi,
I like your work, you know your angles and lighting.
excellent catch here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090914/02/4aae10d93fd9c_m.jpg you could not plan to catch her like this. love it.
this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090928/04/4ac09dd10f3e9_m.jpg is a nice story teller.
my fav and one of your bests https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110510/03/4dc912d8081d4_m.jpg listed.
great job overall.

May 10 11 07:37 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

JenniferRuthMartin wrote:
I'm very new and would like some feedback smile

Jen, you look beautiful and you pose well and have camera presence.
I saw this, nice fantasy art https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110510/01/4dc8fc75c0a4b_m.jpg Gorgeous styling but I am not so crazy about your pose and shoot angle pointing down to your shoulder and somewhat the light is flat, colors are not saturated as they should be to show better your braids and lace and definitely missing some contrast.
love those panties and your smile in thishttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110508/09/4dc6c0bcb899e_m.jpg you are a perfect tease. Could have listed if the lighting was better.
The photographer must watch your face angles and lighting, note that in this photohttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110508/09/4dc6c086b1fca_m.jpg light and shadows of your hair makes your face a bit bloated and your nose puffy.
Keep shooting, you are gorgeous.

May 10 11 07:56 am Link

Model

JenniferRuthMartin

Posts: 20

Derby, England, United Kingdom

Thanks so much for the feedback. The photographer who took these of me is very talented but he struggled with this shoot as we didn't have any proffesional lighting, we were only using a table lamp which wasn't really doing the job smile We are planning another shoot with proper lighting soon. I will make sure to watch out for my angles. Thankyou so much.

May 10 11 08:03 am Link

Model

Emma Sutton

Posts: 30

Poole, England, United Kingdom

I would love to know please smile

May 10 11 08:13 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

JenniferRuthMartin wrote:
Thanks so much for the feedback. The photographer who took these of me is very talented but he struggled with this shoot as we didn't have any proffesional lighting, we were only using a table lamp which wasn't really doing the job smile We are planning another shoot with proper lighting soon. I will make sure to watch out for my angles. Thankyou so much.

I am happy that you are standing by your photographer. Way to go smile
I am looking forward to see more pics soon wink

May 10 11 11:24 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Emma Sutton wrote:
I would love to know please smile

Emma you have a lovely portfolio. You look marvelous, pretty https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100422/08/4bd06dc68b2d7_m.jpg(my fav - listed) and hothttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100604/08/4c09220092623_m.jpg.
Actually I am running out of adjectives.
Love your ballet poseshttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110127/03/4d4151349c5d2_m.jpg excellent light and posture in general.
I like your camera presence and pretty smile.
You may want to spice up a bit this port by adding some real glamour pics instead of this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100606/03/4c0b77fb65eeb_m.jpgby posing in nylons and heels.
you look drop dead gorgeous, regardless. You will do fine in most genres.

May 10 11 12:11 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

I created an index of all inquiries on my first post, in the order it was received. It should be now a bit easier for people who do not have time to navigate through all 20+ pages to find their critique.

May 11 11 03:27 am Link

Photographer

Nanya Bydniss

Posts: 356

New York, New York, US

Do me? smile

May 11 11 05:50 am Link

Model

Hopeton

Posts: 165

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I would love some feedback

May 11 11 06:49 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Rob Latimer wrote:
Do me? smile

Hello Rob,
I like this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110428/21/4dba3e048d56d_m.jpg the best because she is so cute, unable to list because don't like the shoot angle.
Your seamless paper studio shots are a bit boring because outfits, colors or poses do not stand out much against the background color, like here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110507/12/4dc5a12a41020_m.jpg. You can hardly see the underwear. Lighting is flat and you need to coach your models better to give you the model "look"
a cute like this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110507/12/4dc5a0fe5bbc0_m.jpg belongs to outdoor shoots.
this is nicehttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110507/12/4dc5a236e5ef2_m.jpg but preferred in bw or sepia for better impact.
Encouraging results however, I know you can do a lot better.
Keep it up. wink

May 11 11 07:20 am Link