Paully S wrote: Hello neighbor and welcome to MM. With your tall figure and pretty face, you have a lot of potential. As far as advice regarding your current port, it is easy just by following my guidelines spelled out on page 1. Delete the entire first row in consideration of rule [1] - variant images - same scene, same dress. This includes this image. While it is a different scene, your dress is still the same, plus your expression is tense. Oct 19 12 02:18 pm Link thank you for the critique! Unfortunately I can only shoot during the weekends, so I talked to New Moon Makeup and we'll shoot something else. (Not the current project- on wed.) Oct 19 12 02:25 pm Link KGH Images wrote: Welcome to MM KG, thanks for stopping by. Oct 19 12 02:39 pm Link I was squirming here a bit as I knew the multiples were a no no. But having little to go on was looking to fill a port. That all should be changing soon as I have gone digital. Just lining up shoots with a busy schedule. Thanks so much for the advice that I will follow. Ken Oct 19 12 02:44 pm Link KGH Images wrote: Just by deleting those few images you moved your port a few notches up And this is the crux of this forum - delete your weaker (or variant) images and so elevate your port, its that simple. Oct 19 12 03:12 pm Link I was skipped... Oct 19 12 04:29 pm Link Id love to play! Always open for feedback Oct 19 12 04:35 pm Link I would love your imput. Oct 19 12 04:35 pm Link I'd really appreciate your feedback on my photos! Your comments on previous posters have been very helpful. Thank so much! Oct 19 12 06:33 pm Link King Rich Photo wrote: Sorry for skipping you dude. As you are just starting out, your port is brief so that is a good thing. You have started shooting bikini or beachwear, which is fine, but as you learn you ought to experiment with other,non-beach subjects. Oct 19 12 06:36 pm Link Michael Gaffney wrote: You've got some nice photos. Your port can be improved by following the guideline spelled on page 1. Namely, you posting way too may images of the beautiful Greeneyed Goddess, I counted 10. Considering you shot with 50 or more models who you credited in your profile, you ought to show more variety. One of several you ought to remove is this one. while the concept is ok, there are things hanging from above that dont seem to connect with the scene. Oct 19 12 07:37 pm Link ikonas wrote: Thank you for your advice. I took your advice and remove those pictures. Oct 19 12 08:20 pm Link SilverWood Studio wrote: Greetings Sir. You are having a great start and my advice to improve your port is a piece of cake as I will be just following guidelines spelled out on page 1. In consideration of rule [1] - variant images - same scene, same dress - delete the first three images and only keep this one as it offers the best expression and light.. Oct 20 12 09:20 am Link I think I was skipped, or you haven't gotten to me yet. Either way I'm still here Oct 20 12 10:37 am Link I was skipped! Please let me know! Thank you! Oct 20 12 01:25 pm Link Danielle Kitten wrote: Hello Danielle and thanks for your patience. Your port is a good example of how easily one can upgrade their port by simply removing several images. Like in my previous several reviews, I will recommend you delete the entire first row, but only keep your first image as the composition is interesting. Oct 20 12 05:03 pm Link Ok. Oct 20 12 05:08 pm Link Marena Lynn wrote: Hello Marena, your port is in quite good shape as measured by my guidelines spelled out in my original post. Like 90% of your peers, you transgresed on my Rule [1] - variant images. Of the 6 photos by Mission Photography (who is a great photographer), you ought to keep only two as the rest are variants. Even though you changes your outfit, I still consider them variants as the have the same light and backgraound. It is a variation of the same idea. You pick which 4 of the 6 to delete. Oct 20 12 05:14 pm Link Margaret Hope wrote: So you've gone the other extreme of the spectrum. While too frequently photogs display overabundance of their work, you show too little. You've either wiped out your entire port (you joined in 2007) or you hiding your older images. Which one? Oct 20 12 05:21 pm Link Oct 20 12 05:27 pm Link I would love to have your opinion There are few pics of similar themes, but i have trouble to figure out which ones to keep, especially since i don't have that many quality pictures yet https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#30283463 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#30283455 I don't know if i should get rid of the 1st one bc i want to show that i can be photographed long https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#29635521 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#29635493 once again, i don't know which one to keep. i like the 1st pose better but i want to show off my leg, especially since I am only 5'2". Thank you very much for your opinion. Oct 20 12 05:55 pm Link Emmiq wrote: These are excellent and thoughtful questions. I encourage other readers of this forum to be as specific in their inquiries. Oct 20 12 06:18 pm Link Sorry, I was skipped but do you mind if you can give me some feedback? I would really appreciate it, thank you very much Oct 20 12 06:59 pm Link I'd love to know! Hopefully they aren't too bad. Oct 20 12 07:11 pm Link Adam Mohammed wrote: Hello Adam, seems like your persistence has finally paid off Oct 20 12 07:48 pm Link Oct 20 12 07:51 pm Link ikonas wrote: Thank you so much for your input on my port and offer to edit my pictures. you are a great photographer and I wish you the best luck in your career! Oct 20 12 08:48 pm Link How about me? Oct 20 12 11:21 pm Link ikonas wrote: I took your advice and deleted the photos. I believe that my portfolio is much better right now and I am glad that you gave me feedback, thanks for that. Have a good day! Oct 20 12 11:28 pm Link It has been very interesting reading through this thread... and whilst my port is still quite small I am keen on some feedback. Oct 21 12 06:06 am Link I'm game... Oct 21 12 06:13 am Link Little Rouge wrote: We have not forgotten you Little Rouge. You can see your review on page 21. Oct 21 12 11:51 am Link Mangey Designs wrote: Hey Mangey, thanks for stopping by. You are showing some strong mixture of photographic and art skills. In presenting our skills, which is in a portfolio, I am not a fan of the use of collages - Rule [3]. In your case, I would prefer the use of collage for showing only two images - before and after - just like you did effectively in your first image. Showing four images of variations of your editing work I think dillutes the potential impact of your work. I am not asking you to delete those, but avoid this in the future. Oct 21 12 06:42 pm Link If your still going...? Oct 21 12 06:44 pm Link Aalterra Studios wrote: Greetings to you Aalterra. Like the gent in my previous review, you are showing great blend of art and photography. Oct 21 12 07:43 pm Link Elaine Ford wrote: Hello Elaine. While your images are beautiful and your port is quite strong, lets see if we can make it stronger. An easy way to lift your port a notch higher is by following the principle of less is more. Avoid collages and variants, avoid similar themes, etc. I believe a port of 40 images can be much more captivating than one that boasts 75 like yours does. Oct 21 12 08:13 pm Link ikonas wrote: Thanks for the feedback. Oct 21 12 11:18 pm Link Sure ... Let's hear it ... But keep in mind, some images may be in there for reasons you do not understand. For example, on my website, I have words purposely spelled wrong, because it serves a purpose. But I'm game for your feedback. Oct 21 12 11:27 pm Link Your input would be helpful! Advice welcomed! Oct 21 12 11:34 pm Link Oct 22 12 10:55 am Link |