OK..go ahead. Opinions are good for learning. Why do critiques have to be mean? Constructive opinions are good. Honesty doesn't have to be mean in my opinion.
~Jenn~
Bored Squid Photography wrote: i'm new at the whole thing, so any criticism is food for thought....i have an idea of what you'll say, but fire away.
First, pick one image from a model in a specific outfit. Especially if theyre all lit the exact way and are not of good quality. If you want to make a series...make one.
You have a VIP membership, but that doesnt mean you need to fill up your gallery with the crap that would turn models away.
If you do landscape, I would try getting into infrared.
Also, your photoshopping skills need some mad work. The purpose is not to make the photo look like it has had an insane amount of post work...
Find somewhere other than your garage to shoot...at least get a backdrop or something.
LucyS wrote: i was 10th in your 'first 10' thread, but i'll take this one instead, i love criticism!
Im sorry that thread got lost in the abyss. Ill do an extra long one for you
I think your bio is perfect.
The only thing would maybe include a schedule.
Your avi is awesome.
Dead model pose. Man if you got a floor full of games, rock them. Dont just lay like a dead fish.
This is creepy. And perfect.
I dont like the first photo. Makes your body look squat.
The posing her makes your body look wide. And squished....I dont like arm hair. Its a pet peeve of mine.
Good, although I find the background extremely distracting....
Blurry, poor quality and makes you look fat.
Doesnt make sense...Wouldve been better nude.
I do not like this at all.
Looks like a snapshot and your fingers are cut off.
Weirdly cool.
I find the weird blue sky more interesting than you in this photo
Pretty
Your hand looks black...
Awesome place...I believe you couldve rocked it better
Crap...your foots cut off.
I like it
I would have burned the light in the back some, because I try to keep my eyes on your face, but that light is all my eyes want to look at.
Pretty
Interesting. Not something I enjoy, but I know others would.
Your lips are really in focus, as is your dress/shirt. The rest of your face is not though...bugs me.
KatiexMarie
Posts: 274
London, England, United Kingdom
Shaun Tia wrote:
I cant express to you how happy I am that you deleted that aweful pic out of your port.
Yay.
You get brownie points
You look the same in a lot of your photos.
I like the pose and your expression. I have a problem with your skin tone.
This is much better except for your hands.
Your hand looks huge, and I dont enjoy the background. Youre cute. Wish I could see where your chin started and your neck began.
This is nice.
Senior photo?
Sickingly cute.
aww thanks haha yea it was a bit badly edited..n now I look at my avatar, I can't see the part where my chin ends haha..maybe my chin naturally blends in easily with my neck
I taken the 'senior' photo out and replaced it, you can check that one out and tell me if it's better or not, i'm not sure about it so I would appreciate it!
I think i'll keep the sickening one in there haha..do i loose my brownie points? I deleted the other one for you
I deleted the other one for you 
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