Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

model-bb

Posts: 1

Gold Coast, Queensland, Australia

Me too please smile

Dec 24 12 05:13 am Link

Model

Miss Vixxen

Posts: 92

Torquay, England, United Kingdom

and me smile

Dec 24 12 07:31 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Allard Kamermans Photo wrote:
Based on Avatar : Sure thing.

Yes. Gorgeous colors and love the styling- high fashion makeup, beautiful hair updo, lovely outfit. Also like how the model's profile looks.. She's got some great facial features. And the background looks good as well.

Wow:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121102/06/5093cf6b4414c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121012/04/5078033ac0576_m.jpg

Dec 24 12 12:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PerfectionxQueenie wrote:
Let me know,personally I love it but I am having second thoughts about it as my avatar.
I have a great idea for a headshot which soon hopefully I will put that in as my next avatar.

Maybe., I don't like the haughty expression and that I can't see your eyes clearly. I really like the outfit though - and the boots look good as well, however the leg that is crisscrossing on top should be a bit more on an angle so can see that boot more clearly. Otherwise, pose is decent.

This one:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/01/50d42c5cf20e5_m.jpg

Dec 24 12 01:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ms Brandi Timmons wrote:
What about me? smile

Yes. That looks to be a bit of a tough pose to pull off,  but you're able to do it and make it look sexy... Of course the lingerie outfit helps add to the sexiness- it looks good on you and shows off your figure. I also like your makeup (especially eye makeup) and the color/way your hair is fanned out. Expression needs a little work - to be more engaging, though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121102/08/5093e80239425_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121102/07/5093d5aa70df7_m.jpg

Dec 24 12 01:57 pm Link

Photographer

le fashion

Posts: 14

Orlando, Florida, US

How about me?

Dec 24 12 04:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kristin Howell wrote:
Yes, no, maybe? smile

Yes. I don't really like the placement of your arms- looks sort of awkward but you have beautiful facial features. I love your blue eyes and the smoky eye makeup. I also think the movement in your hair looks good, as does the gold necklace on you. Expression is okay.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/10/50d4a4d353114_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/10/50d4a41667aa4_m.jpg

Dec 26 12 09:31 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CBs Photography wrote:
I'm game.

Probably. This is a festive image- I love the bright red outfit which looks great on the model and shows off her figure. The boots, tights, hat, long sleeves are nice touches and the candy cane adds a sexy touch. I like the pose too, but expression should be more engaged.

Dec 26 12 09:54 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MireyGal wrote:
just got some new pics done, including the avatar. smile

No. I don't think our looks would go well together. The background and outfit are too dark. Also the expression is too intense for me.

Like better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/21/50d54414ac5ac_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121205/12/50bfa8ba1356b_m.jpg

Dec 26 12 05:42 pm Link

Model

Laura1982

Posts: 81

New Lebanon, Ohio, US

I would love some critique.

Dec 27 12 11:45 am Link

Model

Lucy Breeze

Posts: 49

Markham, Ontario, Canada

How about me?

Dec 27 12 09:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sibby S wrote:
me please smile

Yes. You have a lovely look about you and you look great in the dark makeup. I also love the movement in your hair. And your pose is very flattering- long neck, able to see face clearly, bare shoulders and that black bra with a bit of cleavage is quite alluring.

Nicely done:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120626/05/4fe9a505d072d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121217/23/50d01f8221650_m.jpg

Dec 27 12 11:37 pm Link

Model

MssJDanielz

Posts: 17

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Would you work with me?

Dec 27 12 11:42 pm Link

Model

Bronte Ann

Posts: 23

Detroit, Michigan, US

Me please smile

Dec 27 12 11:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:
Would you?

Maybe. I like the model and the color scheme you have going on. The bikini looks great on her and she obviously has a great body, but the pose (especially her arms being in front of her stomach) doesn't showcase that as well as it could. Also, model's skin is too perfect- obviously retouched. The hair and eyes look a bit fake as well. Background is obviously altered too.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110130/18/4d4623235fa90_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090428/18/49f7b2a2b6a7c_m.jpg

Dec 28 12 12:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Thiha Ty Htut wrote:
Curious to know smile
Thanks

No. First of all, I can't make you out clearly in the profile view and I don't really like the dark colors in the image. Your expression is kind of blank and pose isn't great. But I do like your outfit and taking a closer look, I think that the autumn background with the beautiful building, is very cool.

Dec 28 12 12:18 am Link

Model

Christine J Summers

Posts: 12

Miami, Florida, US

Me smile

Dec 28 12 12:46 am Link

Model

Denique Lindsay

Posts: 61

Conyers, Georgia, US

me?!

Dec 28 12 10:13 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Poulsons Photography wrote:
Would you?

No. I'm not a fitness model and the expression is really intense, kind of creepy. Also looks like the model has no neck and it's weird that the model's head/arms etc are so much larger than the rest of her body. And your watermark is too large/prominent.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111109/14/4ebb048908422_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100218/21/4b7e241ba92a6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120225/14/4f495f87b8594_m.jpg

Dec 28 12 06:13 pm Link

Photographer

Top Level Studio

Posts: 3254

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

New avatar for me.  What do you think?

Dec 28 12 07:21 pm Link

Photographer

PhotoByOve

Posts: 42

London, England, United Kingdom

We still playing :-) ?

Dec 28 12 07:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jhomel wrote:
How abt me?

Yes. You've got a great physique and decent pose going on, as well as a genuine expression.

Well done:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121215/09/50ccacb183f52_m.jpg

Dec 28 12 11:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

A Virtual Inferno wrote:
Sure, I'll try. It's a selfie, though.

Yes. If your avatar is a selfie, it's pretty damn good! You are a decent model - I like the outfit and your expression. Also like the colors- nice and warm. Would be even better if neck was longer.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/12/50675094642fd_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121125/14/50b29811944fd_m.jpg

Dec 28 12 11:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

KJlove22 wrote:
ok:)

Yes. Though your expression is lacking, I like your overall look. Love your dark thick hair with a bit of movement in it, and your light blue eyes. The outfit (especially black bra) looks great on you and shows off your nice figure. And I like the white background.

Dec 29 12 05:57 pm Link

Photographer

Rob J Photo

Posts: 112

Rancho Palos Verdes, California, US

oh yup!

Dec 29 12 06:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Cristal Bell wrote:
I would like to know!

No. I don't think the outfit is that flattering, the expression is weak, pose is okay but placement of arm behind your back isn't the best place.

Dec 30 12 02:31 pm Link

Model

Mandee87

Posts: 7

Machesney Park, Illinois, US

What do you think smile ?

Dec 30 12 06:50 pm Link

Model

Anastazie

Posts: 33

Stockholm, Stockholm, Sweden

Me thanks

Dec 31 12 05:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kathrynn Gatton wrote:
I would love some feedback. I am in the process of overhauling my portfolio due to a recent weight change. Thanks!

Yes. I like your outfit especially the red bow tied around your waist and also like the look of your trim figure. You also have lovely long blond hair and though your eyes are closed- I can still feel the emotion your expression is bringing. I also like the pose.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121219/01/50d18c333b3bf_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110901/16/4e601b9406b5b_m.jpg

Jan 01 13 02:29 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Justin Kayy wrote:
Your thoughts

No. The image should be higher quality- it's a bit blurry and has a grainy feel that I don't like. Also your expression is not really working for me. The suit outfit looks good on you though.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/10/50d7485112d41_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/08/50d72d6b41033_m.jpg

Jan 01 13 11:28 am Link

Photographer

Digital Blitz

Posts: 2773

Gaithersburg, Maryland, US

Jan 01 13 11:31 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

Give it a try........

Jan 01 13 11:36 am Link

Photographer

Elegance Reflected

Posts: 50

Irvine, California, US

I am in

Jan 01 13 12:35 pm Link

Model

Viktoriyab

Posts: 14

New York, New York, US

I love when model can make some creativity on her photos....

Jan 01 13 12:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Banu S wrote:
Me too please smile

Maybe. You have a lovely look and the outfit looks great on you, but it looks a bit like a snap shot. Though your pose shows off your trim figure. But I would take away the glasses and white pocket book to have your hands free. Also your expression isn't very engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121216/23/50cecb9a186d2_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091014/21/4ad6a9e8ef8d8_m.jpg

Jan 01 13 01:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Miss Vixxen wrote:
and me smile

Yes. I like the color scheme and composition of your avatar image. You've also got a lovely look- lovely lingerie on and a decent figure along with a beautiful expression - love that real smile!

Jan 01 13 03:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

le fashion wrote:
How about me?

Probably. The expression on the model is a bit out of place- too intense, wide eyed, not connected but I do like the outfit and the pose is decent- interesting, symmetrical. I think you have stronger shots though.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121222/11/50d60ef3d3b31_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121212/14/50c901ef40491_m.jpg

Jan 01 13 07:23 pm Link

Photographer

Herb Way

Posts: 1506

Black Mountain, North Carolina, US

OK, how about me?

Jan 01 13 07:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Laura1982 wrote:
I would love some critique.

Maybe. I like the winter theme and icy color scheme. The outfit looks good- especially the glittery silver dress plus your legs look lovely. Your pose is decent though your right arm is kind of just there. The expression needs work though- should be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/08/50dc7184d9589_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31093671

Jan 02 13 08:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lucy Breeze wrote:
How about me?

Maybe. Nice composition. I do like your outfit- a very pretty blue and I like the design on it, as well as the cut. I also like the softness of the image. Your hair, eyes, other facial features are lovely but expression is not that engaged- and the little smile doesn't reach your eyes.

Jan 02 13 09:17 pm Link