TDSImages wrote:
This?

sorry, black and white images only. This one is monotone sepia.... switch it to black and white and I might consider.

Seismic Images wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29695117

Listed! what a dynamic image you have there. kudos

Tom Linkens wrote:

Listed! I know a great film image when I see one, and this is one of them! kudos

Excelsior Photography wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31710635

pass. this is a dynamic image, and I understand the content that you are trying to cover, but for me I think that there is something missing in this shot. Maybe change up the lighting, and try letting it be more organic vs. over the top post work. please feel free to play again.

Excelsior Photography wrote:
Or maybe this one:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27781307

Listed! for the sheer fact that the dude looks like a bad ass! be careful on your technical details like I mentioned on your other shot, but otherwise, kudos

Rich Vengeance wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31043608#

Either way, thanks for taking a peek

pass. I dig the concept, but for me the crop just isn't doing it. What happens if you shoot a full length of her in the same setting?  please feel free to play again.

-Ellie- wrote:
How about this?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28775573 18+

Listed! beautiful usage of light, line, pose, and composition. kudos

-Ellie- wrote:
Or this?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27157738

pass. too much negative space in this one, and I think that the pose and lighting could be improved upon. The concept is there, but how can you show it differently? please feel free to play again.

Digiography wrote:
From my "second" profile on mm:





or
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19617818
18+

pass, pass, pass. for starters, only one image per post in this thread please. but as for the images, you are technically sound in your shooting, but there is just something with raw emotion that is not jumping out and grabbing me yet in your work. Maybe play with how gestures and expressions can say something within the work. please feel free to play again.

rfordphotos wrote:
you were kind enough to take a look before, how about one more:

pass. maybe play with adding a second light source, and play with composition. Also, give your model a cup of espresso to wake up.   please feel free to play again.

T A R I K wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27929179

pass. I see a portrait of a woman who looks like she is sleeping standing up. I think that this image for me would be more about getting some music going in studio to get your model into the right head space where she felt glamorous (assuming that is the mood you were going for). Also, on a technical stand point aesthetically, I am not much of a fan of blown out highlights in whatever material that wall panel is. Maybe try this image with soft light instead of the direct harsh light to eliminate that issue, and get your model to liven up a bit. please feel free to play again.

Anthony Lanza wrote:
Would you list mine?

which one? please post a link to whichever image you want to play with.

Charlie-CNP wrote:
pass. maybe play with adding a second light source, and play with composition. Also, give your model a cup of espresso to wake up.   please feel free to play again.

and, again, thanks for taking a look

Anthony Lanza wrote:
I was curious if there was any in my port, they are all open season for ya. But if I had to pick one for ya it would be this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32043804

ahh, well, for the sake of the rules of this game, please post links (one per post) if you wish to play.

as for the image:

Listed! I think that you could fine tune this image further with a crop to the area with your model and the creature (guessing that is an alligator or baby crocodile?). It is a clever composition though in the sense of concept. The model is holding what is presumed to be alligator (aka alligator skin), while sitting on a couch that could potentially be made of the same material (hey, I have seen weirder things for people who want exotic.... )  but the tonality and lighting works for this image. kudos

Charlie-CNP wrote:

ahh, well, for the sake of the rules of this game, please post links (one per post) if you wish to play.

as for the image:

Listed! I think that you could fine tune this image further with a crop to the area with your model and the creature (guessing that is an alligator or baby crocodile?). It is a clever composition though in the sense of concept. The model is holding what is presumed to be alligator (aka alligator skin), while sitting on a couch that could potentially be made of the same material (hey, I have seen weirder things for people who want exotic.... )  but the tonality and lighting works for this image. kudos

Thank you so much! It is a baby alligator that she's holding . The name of the gator is escaping me at the moment but it was so much fun to do a shoot with a live animal.

Again that you for taking the time out to review my image!

Charlie-CNP wrote:

Listed! what a dynamic image you have there. kudos

Thanks Charlie. Cheers mate.