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Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

SCS Photography wrote:
Sure I would be interested to know what you think...


S

I think you have great ideas, but the images do come off a bit snapshot/ hanging with my buds   

althought

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080402/19/47f414e3c7089_m.jpg

is cool... cause you do have an ability to make people fly!!

Apr 09 08 01:54 pm Link

Photographer

BrandonSmithGallery

Posts: 6

Hartsburg, Missouri, US

I put the non-nudes in here, would appreciate feedback, :-)

Apr 09 08 01:56 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Ash Turner wrote:
I don't have any nudes in mine.
So feel free to take a go at me smile

I think you are off to a really good start, but you definatly need to work with a much greater variety of photographer.
I'd deff love to see what other stuff you produce a but down the line

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080404/22/47f6e0a5bc466_m.jpg
beautiful

Apr 09 08 01:56 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Natalia Drulle wrote:
yesplease... nooo nudes smile

I think you have great lighting and composition...  but you need to stray a little away from the headshots..
that may be your thing but:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071217/08/47667c30e965c_m.jpg

this one is great!!   so why not go for some more full body?

awesome work though


and you live one town over from me (just through id throw that out there)

Apr 09 08 01:58 pm Link

Photographer

KSA photography

Posts: 226

Lansing, Michigan, US

NN Star Photography wrote:

I think you are doing a great job.

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080328/10/47ed00a7313e5_m.jpg

this one is awesome.
It kinda makes me think of footloose because of the whole boots thing..

I think your port is looking pretty awesome.

thanks,
someone once critiqued this one saying "it looks like she is peeing light"
I thought that was pretty funny

Apr 09 08 02:00 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

DaVINZI wrote:
sure

I think you shots look good, really good.. but a lot of them almost seem like duplicates because they framing and posing is all the same

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080325/08/47e8f59bc8980_m.jpg

... honestly, I just wonder what the other side of your face looks like.. because you are looking the same way in almost every pic.

Apr 09 08 02:00 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Dark Photography Design wrote:
go for it if youre still in class smile

note - one implied, but thats all..

I'm deff a fan
I love the work.
I love the ideas and composition in a lot of the images

and i deff love this one:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/071219/12/4769585c858f5_m.jpg

keep up the work.

Apr 09 08 02:01 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Phillippe

Posts: 629

Houston, Texas, US

Thanks for the input.

Apr 09 08 02:02 pm Link

Model

julie-christine

Posts: 42

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

Thanks very much for your time and your thoughts!!  Much appreciated!

Apr 09 08 02:03 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Christine Rose wrote:
mine's def G -rated. Go for it

I think you are off to a start, but it seems a lot of your shots are still a bit nervous in a way.  It almost seems like you are second guessing some of them.  Dont be scared to be more creative, because I think a bit more creativity in the shots is all you need

this one is very well done though

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/13/47f90db300f3f_m.jpg

Apr 09 08 02:03 pm Link

Photographer

Wiz of Oz Photography

Posts: 316

Davenport, Iowa, US

Go for it!

Apr 09 08 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Alex Ha wrote:
I just started so, let me know what you think and any tips would be great!

for just srating out you are off to a great start.
You show a lot of thought and creativity behind the shots

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080409/14/47fd04c1b334a_m.jpg

is one of the best, but im a sucker for strange angles.

Besides that, just keep working with different people. better shots come with more experience.., and if this is what you have done so far.. you are gunna be great.

Apr 09 08 02:05 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Dorothy Ricot wrote:
hit me with your best shot.

You have a good look but its hard to say much because none of them are done professionally.


https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080407/14/47fa6d23c8cee_m.jpg

this one has a fun concept but the lighting distract from it a lot.

I  think after you start working with some photographers you will deff be onto something good.

Apr 09 08 02:07 pm Link

Model

Chania

Posts: 118

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

If you have time do me...

Apr 09 08 02:07 pm Link

Photographer

William Price

Posts: 4

Providence, Rhode Island, US

I like to hear what you think.

Apr 09 08 02:08 pm Link

Photographer

Alex Ha

Posts: 107

Chicago, Illinois, US

NN Star Photography wrote:

for just srating out you are off to a great start.
You show a lot of thought and creativity behind the shots

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080409/14/47fd04c1b334a_m.jpg

is one of the best, but im a sucker for strange angles.

Besides that, just keep working with different people. better shots come with more experience.., and if this is what you have done so far.. you are gunna be great.

Thank-you big_smile

I just got my Canon 40D SLR a month ago.
Wild thing..that picture I took was with a sony point and shoot 7.2 mp...and I still like that picture most out of all of my pictures

Apr 09 08 02:08 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Amy Dani-elle wrote:
i do

I think you are a beautil girl

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080401/22/47f2ea56d176f_m.jpg

this one is very nice as well

but just as a side note.. on your profile it says you are selecting limited trade work and looking for mainly paid work... but that you dont do nudes

i think you should stick with trade for now and not limit yourself like that..  nudes i can understand not doing.. but i dont agree with you accepting limited  tfcd

Apr 09 08 02:09 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

class is over but i will be back when into my next one in 10 min

Apr 09 08 02:09 pm Link

Photographer

Chicchowmein

Posts: 14585

Palm Beach, Florida, US

NN Star Photography wrote:

I think you are off to a start, but it seems a lot of your shots are still a bit nervous in a way.  It almost seems like you are second guessing some of them.  Dont be scared to be more creative, because I think a bit more creativity in the shots is all you need

this one is very well done though

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/13/47f90db300f3f_m.jpg

Apr 09 08 02:10 pm Link

Photographer

Chicchowmein

Posts: 14585

Palm Beach, Florida, US

Yeah well these are commercial shots -- fine art / creative stuff on another site. These are all for commercial comps. Thanx. Your stuff is more edgy but I appreciate all different types of work.

Best,
Christine

Apr 09 08 02:13 pm Link

Model

Ash3

Posts: 5911

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

NN Star Photography wrote:

I think you are off to a really good start, but you definatly need to work with a much greater variety of photographer.
I'd deff love to see what other stuff you produce a but down the line

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080404/22/47f6e0a5bc466_m.jpg
beautiful

Thanks smile

Apr 09 08 02:14 pm Link

Model

Miki Jotalee

Posts: 104

Southend-on-Sea, England, United Kingdom

OK - if you're still around I'd appreciate a critique! I've got loads of different shoots lined up but I'm wondering what someone else thinks I need in my port and what I should take out....

Apr 09 08 02:16 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

BrandonSmithGallery wrote:
I put the non-nudes in here, would appreciate feedback, :-)

I think the color and quality of you images is up there, but its deff lacking something.
keep shoots and trying new things

this one is my fav

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/22/47f98dafb8a81_m.jpg

Apr 09 08 02:18 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

KSA photography wrote:

thanks,
someone once critiqued this one saying "it looks like she is peeing light"
I thought that was pretty funny

i actually thought it looked more like you were walking on a liquid

Apr 09 08 02:19 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Wiz of Oz Photography wrote:
Go for it!

i really love your work
a lot

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080217/21/47b8e79d95d18_m.jpg

this is fascinated me

but i have nothing negative to say about at all

in fact you work is what i work for. i wish mine looked like that

Apr 09 08 02:24 pm Link

Model

SophieS

Posts: 1024

Shanghai, Shanghai, China

Go for it big_smile.

Apr 09 08 02:25 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Chania wrote:
If you have time do me...

you have a great body and should use that more to your advantage

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080225/14/47c313ebbeb8b_m.jpg

this one is great. you have awesome curves and need to use them more

Apr 09 08 02:27 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

william price wrote:
I like to hear what you think.

im going to be totally honest here

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080329/20/47eee374ecbdf_m.jpg

this is the ONLY one i like.

the rest need better posing or expression.. or just need to be redone completely in a totally different location

Apr 09 08 02:28 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Miki Jotalee wrote:
OK - if you're still around I'd appreciate a critique! I've got loads of different shoots lined up but I'm wondering what someone else thinks I need in my port and what I should take out....

i love your look and style
please let me know when you add to your port cause i would love to keep up on it
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080201/12/47a35df74203a_m.jpg this is my fav
but amazing port so far.

Apr 09 08 02:58 pm Link

Model

-Valerie-

Posts: 11

Boca Raton, Florida, US

Please critique me

Apr 09 08 02:59 pm Link

Model

Kindra Marie

Posts: 2089

San Diego, California, US

no nudes

Apr 09 08 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

-Valerie- wrote:
Please critique me

you have a great look to you.
and i admire it
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080105/21/478038306b904_m.jpg
this is an excellent shot.  great work.
i look forward to seeing more of it.

Apr 09 08 03:44 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Kindra Myers wrote:
no nudes

I think you have an awesome style, and are doing amazing but could make so much more out of it.
i love all of it so far

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080319/15/47e166ec49581_m.jpg

this is amazing.

Apr 09 08 03:45 pm Link

Model

jessy nix

Posts: 1297

Urbino, Marche, Italy

i just want to say your avatar is very cute! ^_^ (i have nudes in mine...)

Apr 09 08 03:58 pm Link

Photographer

Tanya Greene

Posts: 337

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

I'd love your opinion smile school safe port.

Apr 09 08 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Darland Photography

Posts: 216

Dallas, Texas, US

i'm an amateur but would love a critique!!

Apr 09 08 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Duke Morse

Posts: 943

Dallas, Texas, US

Hit me with it! smile

Apr 09 08 04:17 pm Link

Model

Ozzie Mandee

Posts: 186

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

please do- love to know what you think!

Apr 09 08 04:22 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

jessy nix wrote:
i just want to say your avatar is very cute! ^_^ (i have nudes in mine...)

nudes are okay, im not in class anymore.
i think your photos are rather sweet
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/070920/14/46f2cacf0ff6f_m.jpg
this one is awesome.
i love the skirt, and the expression,  and the lighting.. and well just damn near everything in the pic.
and honestly i had a hard time picking one favorite.
i think you port is sweet

Apr 09 08 04:39 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Tanya Greene wrote:
I'd love your opinion smile school safe port.

your port is rather myspace-ish
which is not good.
the idea in them are good though
and.. this is not my opinion but ive been yelled at for this too
::real photographers dont use selective coloring::

Apr 09 08 04:42 pm Link