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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
SCS Photography wrote: Sure I would be interested to know what you think... S I think you have great ideas, but the images do come off a bit snapshot/ hanging with my buds althought
is cool... cause you do have an ability to make people fly!!
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BrandonSmithGallery
Posts: 6
Hartsburg, Missouri, US
I put the non-nudes in here, would appreciate feedback, :-)
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Ash Turner wrote: I don't have any nudes in mine. So feel free to take a go at me ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) I think you are off to a really good start, but you definatly need to work with a much greater variety of photographer. I'd deff love to see what other stuff you produce a but down the line
beautiful
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Natalia Drulle wrote: yesplease... nooo nudes ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) I think you have great lighting and composition... but you need to stray a little away from the headshots.. that may be your thing but: this one is great!! so why not go for some more full body? awesome work though and you live one town over from me (just through id throw that out there)
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KSA photography
Posts: 226
Lansing, Michigan, US
NN Star Photography wrote:
I think you are doing a great job.
this one is awesome. It kinda makes me think of footloose because of the whole boots thing.. I think your port is looking pretty awesome. thanks, someone once critiqued this one saying "it looks like she is peeing light" I thought that was pretty funny
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
DaVINZI wrote: sure I think you shots look good, really good.. but a lot of them almost seem like duplicates because they framing and posing is all the same
... honestly, I just wonder what the other side of your face looks like.. because you are looking the same way in almost every pic.
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Dark Photography Design wrote: go for it if youre still in class note - one implied, but thats all.. I'm deff a fan I love the work. I love the ideas and composition in a lot of the images and i deff love this one:
keep up the work.
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julie-christine
Posts: 42
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Thanks very much for your time and your thoughts!! Much appreciated!
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Christine Rose wrote: mine's def G -rated. Go for it I think you are off to a start, but it seems a lot of your shots are still a bit nervous in a way. It almost seems like you are second guessing some of them. Dont be scared to be more creative, because I think a bit more creativity in the shots is all you need this one is very well done though
![https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/13/47f90db300f3f_m.jpg]()
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Alex Ha wrote: I just started so, let me know what you think and any tips would be great! for just srating out you are off to a great start. You show a lot of thought and creativity behind the shots
is one of the best, but im a sucker for strange angles. Besides that, just keep working with different people. better shots come with more experience.., and if this is what you have done so far.. you are gunna be great.
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Dorothy Ricot wrote: hit me with your best shot. You have a good look but its hard to say much because none of them are done professionally.
this one has a fun concept but the lighting distract from it a lot. I think after you start working with some photographers you will deff be onto something good.
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Chania
Posts: 118
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
If you have time do me...
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William Price
Posts: 4
Providence, Rhode Island, US
I like to hear what you think.
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Alex Ha
Posts: 107
Chicago, Illinois, US
NN Star Photography wrote:
for just srating out you are off to a great start. You show a lot of thought and creativity behind the shots
is one of the best, but im a sucker for strange angles. Besides that, just keep working with different people. better shots come with more experience.., and if this is what you have done so far.. you are gunna be great. Thank-you I just got my Canon 40D SLR a month ago. Wild thing..that picture I took was with a sony point and shoot 7.2 mp...and I still like that picture most out of all of my pictures
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Amy Dani-elle wrote: i do I think you are a beautil girl
this one is very nice as well but just as a side note.. on your profile it says you are selecting limited trade work and looking for mainly paid work... but that you dont do nudes i think you should stick with trade for now and not limit yourself like that.. nudes i can understand not doing.. but i dont agree with you accepting limited tfcd
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
class is over but i will be back when into my next one in 10 min
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Chicchowmein
Posts: 14585
Palm Beach, Florida, US
NN Star Photography wrote:
I think you are off to a start, but it seems a lot of your shots are still a bit nervous in a way. It almost seems like you are second guessing some of them. Dont be scared to be more creative, because I think a bit more creativity in the shots is all you need this one is very well done though
![https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/13/47f90db300f3f_m.jpg]()
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Chicchowmein
Posts: 14585
Palm Beach, Florida, US
Yeah well these are commercial shots -- fine art / creative stuff on another site. These are all for commercial comps. Thanx. Your stuff is more edgy but I appreciate all different types of work. Best, Christine
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Ash3
Posts: 5911
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
NN Star Photography wrote:
I think you are off to a really good start, but you definatly need to work with a much greater variety of photographer. I'd deff love to see what other stuff you produce a but down the line
beautiful Thanks ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Miki Jotalee
Posts: 104
Southend-on-Sea, England, United Kingdom
OK - if you're still around I'd appreciate a critique! I've got loads of different shoots lined up but I'm wondering what someone else thinks I need in my port and what I should take out....
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
BrandonSmithGallery wrote: I put the non-nudes in here, would appreciate feedback, :-) I think the color and quality of you images is up there, but its deff lacking something. keep shoots and trying new things this one is my fav
![https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080406/22/47f98dafb8a81_m.jpg]()
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
KSA photography wrote:
thanks, someone once critiqued this one saying "it looks like she is peeing light" I thought that was pretty funny i actually thought it looked more like you were walking on a liquid
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Wiz of Oz Photography wrote: Go for it! i really love your work a lot
this is fascinated me but i have nothing negative to say about at all in fact you work is what i work for. i wish mine looked like that
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SophieS
Posts: 1024
Shanghai, Shanghai, China
Go for it ![big_smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/big_smile.png) .
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Chania wrote: If you have time do me... you have a great body and should use that more to your advantage
this one is great. you have awesome curves and need to use them more
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
william price wrote: I like to hear what you think. im going to be totally honest here
this is the ONLY one i like. the rest need better posing or expression.. or just need to be redone completely in a totally different location
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Miki Jotalee wrote: OK - if you're still around I'd appreciate a critique! I've got loads of different shoots lined up but I'm wondering what someone else thinks I need in my port and what I should take out.... i love your look and style please let me know when you add to your port cause i would love to keep up on it
this is my fav but amazing port so far.
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-Valerie-
Posts: 11
Boca Raton, Florida, US
Photographer
NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
-Valerie- wrote: Please critique me you have a great look to you. and i admire it
this is an excellent shot. great work. i look forward to seeing more of it.
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Kindra Myers wrote: no nudes I think you have an awesome style, and are doing amazing but could make so much more out of it. i love all of it so far
this is amazing.
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jessy nix
Posts: 1297
Urbino, Marche, Italy
i just want to say your avatar is very cute! ^_^ (i have nudes in mine...)
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Tanya Greene
Posts: 337
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
I'd love your opinion ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) school safe port.
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Darland Photography
Posts: 216
Dallas, Texas, US
i'm an amateur but would love a critique!!
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Duke Morse
Posts: 943
Dallas, Texas, US
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Hit me with it! ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Ozzie Mandee
Posts: 186
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
please do- love to know what you think!
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
jessy nix wrote: i just want to say your avatar is very cute! ^_^ (i have nudes in mine...) nudes are okay, im not in class anymore. i think your photos are rather sweet
this one is awesome. i love the skirt, and the expression, and the lighting.. and well just damn near everything in the pic. and honestly i had a hard time picking one favorite. i think you port is sweet
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NN Star Photography
Posts: 819
Howell, New Jersey, US
Tanya Greene wrote: I'd love your opinion school safe port. your port is rather myspace-ish which is not good. the idea in them are good though and.. this is not my opinion but ive been yelled at for this too ::real photographers dont use selective coloring::
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