NN Star Photography wrote:
I love your images.  They all have a lot of personality and character behind them
I wish there were more models like you around here in NJ



this is great, i love this one!!

Thank you NJ isn't that far away.  It just requires more planning.

Darland Photography wrote:
i'm an amateur but would love a critique!!

this is one the best in the port.
i feel like a lot of your shots are very sear studio portrait-ish...
and people are going to give you shit for the one pic with selective coloring. (yes i know i have one too) but photographers seem to dislike them on here.

Spyro wrote:

Thank you NJ isn't that far away.  It just requires more planning.

well then over the summer... we shall see what happens :-)

Duke Morse wrote:
Hit me with it!

you are a very very talented photographer.
I think you work is strong and something many people are going to love to look at.
I just think sometimes where you watermark is a bit to much and slightly distracting from the image.. but thats just personal preference



great job on this one!

Ozzie Mandee wrote:
please do- love to know what you think!

I think you make a great model. you have a very natural beauty to you, which isn't as common anymore... so major kudos on that one



this is really creative and i adore this shot a whole lot.

you expression are pretty on target.. so awesome job with that as well..

..and i also admire that as talented as you are you are still open to accepting tfcd shots.. just to build the port.  that another sign of an excellent dedicated model

Saturn Style wrote:
if your still bored, look at both of my ports

i like this port a whole lot

that awesome

for some reason i love how nice legs look in photographs, and you capture then exceptionally well.

awesome job with this port.

SophieS wrote:
I think you skipped me! :x

sorry about that i remember looking at the pics, i guess i forgot to respond



this is the strongest one if your port without a doubt.

a lot of the others are good.. but not great...

but i think you have that great potential and should deff keep working on it.

Lanya B wrote:
yes please!

in a non-offensive way it is apparent that you just started shoot.
thats not a bad thing though.
just real some books, take notes of other people work you see.. and keep trying.
the more you try the better they will get so dont give up or get discouraged.

and make sure you have fun with it

cinema photography wrote:
Sure, have a go at mine!

i like the coloring in a lot of your images, but I also dislike half of them as well.
but thats just me, not everyone ya know?
this one deff caught my eye though


very well done.

NN Star Photography wrote:

nudes are okay, im not in class anymore.
i think your photos are rather sweet

this one is awesome.
i love the skirt, and the expression,  and the lighting.. and well just damn near everything in the pic.
and honestly i had a hard time picking one favorite.
i think you port is sweet

aw thank you, you're too nice!! *^_^* grazie mille!

NN Star Photography wrote:

in a non-offensive way it is apparent that you just started shoot.
thats not a bad thing though.
just real some books, take notes of other people work you see.. and keep trying.
the more you try the better they will get so dont give up or get discouraged.

and make sure you have fun with it

Lanya B wrote:

thanks! any books you'd recommend?

Scott Kelby is usually really good in my opinion with wording things.
http://www.amazon.com/Digital-Photograp … 032147404X
thats a good one.

From there when you find your style.. check out some books on lighting (which is what i am working on now)

and any book on whatever program you use for editing never hurts.

GARY HINDS wrote:
why not

thanks
gary

for a photog who's style is very out of my element i must admitt i do like your work a lot



this one is phenominal.

i love your framing.. that is a consistant excellence in every shot you have posted.

great work.

Shay Saldana wrote:
Would love a critique

you are a very pretty girl.
i think you need to work a bit more on the expressions though cause i see a lot of them same ones over and over again

i think you need to choose different photog as well because a lot of your images are very flat looking (which is not your fault)

i do enjoy this one though:

Samin wrote:
I'd love one! thanks

i think you are doing a great job.
i dont like a lot of the angles and lighting in some of you pics...

this one is my favorite, although i think i would have edited it much differently.

i think you are doing a good job though.

NN Star Photography wrote:

you are a very pretty girl.
i think you need to work a bit more on the expressions though cause i see a lot of them same ones over and over again

i think you need to choose different photog as well because a lot of your images are very flat looking (which is not your fault)

i do enjoy this one though:

hey thanks so much! Which ones do you think are flat? I will work on the expressions as well.

Patrick Shipstad wrote:
Sure thanks! :-)

you are the second person whose port made it terribly hard for me to choose a favorite.
i love your work

this is great.

i love all of you techniques and hope one day i will be that talented.

Shay Saldana wrote:

hey thanks so much! Which ones do you think are flat? I will work on the expressions as well.

the ones on the bottom row. and the pool hall one are good.  the others kinda make you look one dimensional on the background. 

that is usually caused by either bad lighting or terrible editing, but they dont look over edited so it could just be like lighting.

TONY S TURNER  wrote:
Sure... Why not... Check it! ~

i think you are doing great work.
i love all the lighting. and composition.
i love the themes
i love it all
and especially this:

Miss Mariss wrote:
me please..if you're still bored!!

im really not sure what it is but im not a huge fan of you port. i feel like its lacking something and i cant even pick out what it is.
some shots are just from unflattering angles, some are a bit blurry..  i think you should work with some different photogs.

Chanel Rene Photography wrote:
I'd love to hear your feedback... :-)

i think you do outstanding work. i love the colors, the models, all of it looks awesome



is great

i think you have a way of capturing the best looks in people.

Ratchet Stardust wrote:
now that you're not in class anymore I'd love your opinion. 

I am actually very impressed with you work. you have a way of creating those darker images but keeping them very sophisticated and classy at the same time



this one blew me away.
i love this one

come to NJ. haha we'll make some awesome images.

Chrissi Wylde wrote:
I would love a critique, thanks!

there are a decent amount of shots that come off as being very well done, and other that dont look professional in the least

i think you should get rid of those and it would make your port 3432 times stronger



is one you need to keep.. i absolutely love this one.

I think you have a lot of potential though.