John-Anthony  wrote:
why not critiques are fun

i enjoyed your work a lot... a whole lot.
i felt like i had to look at each image for a bit cause i wanted to make sure i took it all in.
you have great ideas and the talent to express them very very well.



is awesome
i love the shadows and the lighting.

Dorie Fiouris wrote:
would love some. no nudes here.

this is by far the best one in the port
as a new photographer you are doing a great job
but there are to many shots that look exactly alike in your port.
i say get rid of some of those.
a port with 6 strong images.. looks much better than one with 20 mediocre ones.
awesome start though

NN Star Photography wrote:

I think you have great ideas, but the images do come off a bit snapshot/ hanging with my buds   

althought



is cool... cause you do have an ability to make people fly!!

Thx

Have only been taking them for about 9 weeks. SOOOO much to learn, and so little time

S

Neil Nicholson wrote:
Yeah, I would love some criticism of the shots from my first shoot
is there anything I could have done to capture better images

honestly a lot of them look like shots that are very unprofessionally done.
the window shades behind you model and never flattering... unless the window is being used in the shot.  hang a sheet up on the wall for a quick makeshift backdrop.

the shadows are also very very distracting.
use more of the lights indoors and turn off the flash.

and the last two in the port as soo dark, they almost really aren't work posting.

just keep shooting from different angles, and test out more options with lighting... you've got the idea.

NN Star Photography wrote:

honestly a lot of them look like shots that are very unprofessionally done.
the window shades behind you model and never flattering... unless the window is being used in the shot.  hang a sheet up on the wall for a quick makeshift backdrop.

the shadows are also very very distracting.
use more of the lights indoors and turn off the flash.

and the last two in the port as soo dark, they almost really aren't work posting.

just keep shooting from different angles, and test out more options with lighting... you've got the idea.

now dont get my wrong, you are a beautiful girl, but a lot of you images only make me think of high school pictures.  the first one need to get rid of the caption on top... thats not necessary.

i think you have the look and potential to do great things, im just not seeing the creativity in them, i just see a really pretty girl with nicely done hair and makeup

and you should delete the black backdrop images cause they look like you done have hair..

this one is the prettiest though

Shon D Photography wrote:
yes

this one is my favorite
i commented on it some time ago

i think a lot of your shots have great concepts, most of them have great lighting
i like your work a lot..

the only thing that bother me is in your profile you take everyone for taking a chance on this "21 year old amateur"... but at the bottom you write you are trying to make it a profession and not a hobby... and are taking limited tfp.  I think that is a silly idea.

because charging doesn't make it a profession, its the talent and recognizable where that becomes the title..

i just think you should think twice about that one.

NN Star Photography wrote:

i enjoyed your work a lot... a whole lot.
i felt like i had to look at each image for a bit cause i wanted to make sure i took it all in.
you have great ideas and the talent to express them very very well.



is awesome
i love the shadows and the lighting.

Thanks for the compliments

NN Star Photography wrote:

now dont get my wrong, you are a beautiful girl, but a lot of you images only make me think of high school pictures.  the first one need to get rid of the caption on top... thats not necessary.

i think you have the look and potential to do great things, im just not seeing the creativity in them, i just see a really pretty girl with nicely done hair and makeup

and you should delete the black backdrop images cause they look like you done have hair..

this one is the prettiest though

thank you for your help!

NN Star Photography wrote:

I am actually very impressed with you work. you have a way of creating those darker images but keeping them very sophisticated and classy at the same time



this one blew me away.
i love this one

come to NJ. haha we'll make some awesome images.

Thank you so much.  I wish I had a teleportation device.

Leena wrote:
can i has one?

Your profile says experienced and in your port not a single photo seems to be professionally done.... am I  missing something here or does that make no sense?

dreslin photography wrote:
i'm up for one

Im ususally not a fan of your style but damn you make it look good. really good.  your composition is definatly amazing.. i love your work 

great stuff

xaveir wrote:
You can Love me Sexy!

im not a fan of your lighting at all
every image seem to have no highlights or and form of lighting even in it..



is the best image, but it still needs to be better lit.

Angela Nicole P wrote:
Sure!

your work is fantastic... like amazing
I coulnt pic just one shot i liked the most.. it was really hard.
your posing is great, your expression, everything about it.
amazing shots!!

TwistedDoll wrote:
sure. ^_^

I like your shots a lot, but they seem like sometimes you are trying to hard to make this angry or agressive expression and it comes of looking really akward. I think you are off to a good start...



as for your profile, remove where it says :
I will do TFP, because honestly to think I have the audacity for pay is ridiculous, I am obviously an amateur.

Just leave it at you are currently accepting tfp.. what you wrote give it a negative sound.... your never an amateur... just not a pro...

Michael Barrett wrote:
Me!!

i think your work is great



this is the best image

the only thing I dont like is that no models are credited in the pics or on the port.. so from a modeling perspective, girls are going to question this because there are no refrences.

Abigail A wrote:
bring it on...;-)

eh not my stlye, and not a fan. you need more imaged. they should be more diverse 

this is the best one

AngelEyes wrote:
Me please?

i think you are doing a great job. i think you should try to work to make your port a bit more colorful, but that just my opinion

i do like this one though