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Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Rebecca Mckay wrote:
me please smile

the only things i noticed is all you close head shot look more like mugshots.. and when your feet are showing you never wear shoes... wear shoes.. they will make it look a lot better.


https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/070920/21/46f331036b546_m.jpg

this is the best one.

Apr 11 08 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Marlo Dell'Antonio wrote:
Sure thing! I can't remember if I already posted here or not... if so, many apologies!

you have a great look and a great body. i love your poses

this one is the best by far

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080410/17/47fe84d00a1c2_m.jpg

but  i think you do great work

Apr 11 08 12:51 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

SECMON wrote:
Me too Please.

you are a pretty girl, and i think you are doing great.. but your port is terrible.  whatever photographers you worked with... no bueno.

not a single image is sharp or clear, and they would look excellent if they were.

so you doing good, just find new photographers.

Apr 11 08 12:53 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

AliceLopez wrote:
meeeees

oh boy
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080401/17/47f2a781069b6_m.jpg
this is the only good one

you need to remove where it says experienced..
and you need to remove where it says you are no accepting tfcd.

your a pretty girl, but you port doesnt show me the expeerience you claim, or any reason to pay you..

and remove that your mother is involved with you modeling, she can be your escort but no photographer is going to want your mother directing them

Apr 11 08 12:56 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Shaolin Photo wrote:
I'm always up for a crit.

i love your work

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080328/14/47ed34b3b538f_m.jpg

this is soo captivating.

i love it.

i love all of it, i can wait to see more.

Apr 11 08 12:57 pm Link

Photographer

Kenzphotos

Posts: 1868

Anaheim, California, US

Do you have time for 'one more' critique?  If so, please feel free to look over my stuff.  Thanks!

Apr 11 08 12:58 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

RebeccaArielPhotography wrote:
Me!
big_smile

i feel like your images come off much more like snapshots of friends than they do photography....

Apr 11 08 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Miss Nicole wrote:
I do!

you have an amazingly fun and diverse port... i love it
fantastic work

https://img7.modelmayhem.com/070520/01/464fd90f033c2_m.jpg

this one is my fav.

let me know when you add new things cause i would love to see it

Apr 11 08 01:00 pm Link

Photographer

Dorie Fiouris

Posts: 24

Hiram, Georgia, US

NN Star Photography wrote:

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/070921/12/46f3fb4f76d79_m.jpg
this is by far the best one in the port
as a new photographer you are doing a great job
but there are to many shots that look exactly alike in your port.
i say get rid of some of those.
a port with 6 strong images.. looks much better than one with 20 mediocre ones.
awesome start though

thanks

Apr 11 08 01:00 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Photos by Mr Ice wrote:
go

better lighting, higher quality.. and editing are all defintaly needed.

Apr 11 08 01:02 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Lady Legs wrote:
Oh please!!!!! Pretty please and thank you!!

you definatly come off as a newer model, but you have tons and tons of potential.
i think with more experience you will create great things

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080409/14/47fd0aa2aec55_m.jpg

this is great!!

Apr 11 08 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Stephen T Photography wrote:
i could use a critique

your work seems kinda inconsistant.  some are framed and lit well.. others are not..
some are great shots.. others are not.

its say i love about 75% of it, but i think you should get rid of the less stronger shots and replace them with some new awesome ones..

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080318/02/47df5be714f24_m.jpg

i love this, but i hate how its all pink

Apr 11 08 01:07 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Kenzphotos wrote:
Do you have time for 'one more' critique?  If so, please feel free to look over my stuff.  Thanks!

youve got those shots that are the ones magazines are looking for.  not my style.. but damn f'in skilled.  excellent work.  your ways with light fascinates me...

amazing stuff

im not picking a favorite image.. cause i honestly cant.

Apr 11 08 01:09 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

keep em coming?

Apr 11 08 01:49 pm Link

Photographer

HEF Photography

Posts: 1817

Jacksonville, Florida, US

Promise I won't cry !

Apr 11 08 01:51 pm Link

Model

Sweetcookies1987

Posts: 236

Montrose, California, US

I would love to know what you think...

Apr 11 08 01:52 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Harry Forsythe wrote:
Promise I won't cry !

well your port is diffrent, but not in a good way.
its almost like a sear portrait studio gone wrong.
i duno, the lighting and all is good, as is the composition but im not diggin it.
... and your watermark has to do, its way to distracting.

Apr 11 08 02:09 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

Sweetcookies1987 wrote:
I would love to know what you think...

i think your port is awesome.
i love it a lot.

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071007/16/47093da97975d_m.jpg

this one is my fav cause that bra is from victorias secret and im wearing the same one.

the only thing you need to change in the port is this

-it says you have only been modeling a few months
-it says you are experienced and have rates


pick one or the other.

Apr 11 08 02:12 pm Link

Photographer

NN Star Photography

Posts: 819

Howell, New Jersey, US

anyone left?

Apr 11 08 05:00 pm Link

Model

Ivy Red Again

Posts: 6

San Francisco, California, US

I'm in... and I have two if you have the time...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/member.php?id=13222

Apr 11 08 05:48 pm Link

Model

AngelEyes Kari

Posts: 2093

Milaca, Minnesota, US

NN Star Photography wrote:

i think you are doing a great job. i think you should try to work to make your port a bit more colorful, but that just my opinion

i do like this one though

https://img7.modelmayhem.com/070509/17/46423f6f2abda_m.jpg

Thank you.  And yeah I know...too much black and white.  smile

Apr 11 08 10:37 pm Link

Photographer

Rab Townsend

Posts: 62

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'll take one.

Apr 11 08 10:39 pm Link

Model

Jessie J Marie

Posts: 156

Los Angeles, California, US

I just made my page, I have no professional experiance, but do you see potential as me being a model in some of the photographs?? They are all self-taken.

Apr 11 08 11:45 pm Link

Model

Yehoshua David

Posts: 466

Richmond, California, US

NO!

Apr 11 08 11:46 pm Link

Model

Ashli Smith

Posts: 257

East Providence, Rhode Island, US

If I can would like to be critiqued!  Thanks

Apr 11 08 11:50 pm Link

Photographer

DM7Studios

Posts: 33

Simi Valley, California, US

go for it

Apr 11 08 11:51 pm Link