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-Terra -
Posts: 217
Norfolk, Virginia, US
Im very interested. What do you think.
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ivcity
Posts: 120
Canterbury, England, United Kingdom
Please tell me your opinion
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Adrienne M Plus
Posts: 194
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
Would love your opinions.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
until MM tech people stop 'fixing" one thing while breaking another, I cannot do the critiques because I cannot see your ports. Sorry.
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Adrienne M Plus
Posts: 194
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
LOL! We are anxiously waiting:)
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Ash3
Posts: 5911
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Once MM decides it wants to work again, and if you're still going, then I'd love one.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Ash Turner wrote: Once MM decides it wants to work again, and if you're still going, then I'd love one. OK...starting with Ash and working my way back up... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: 4. Worst image I chose this as my least fave because I am generally not a big fan of these collage type images. The iamges become way too small to see adequate details. I think of a couple of them would be nice in full res. Yes yes yes I know I chose a collage style image as my fav...I think the cute little story the food pics tell over rides the negative of the collage. 5. Best Physical Attribute Breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute tattoo 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. a lot of models who have lovely breasts such as yoursefl would use their breasts as the center point to all of their images....I am pleased to see that you have more depth than just the boob shots. I see from your bio, that you want to work on expressions...I agree...such a pretty face, but it's either a smile or a dramatic look. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Adrienne Arlene wrote: LOL! We are anxiously waiting:) yes we can all thank MM for their lousy server problems for the delay!! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image: you look absolutely amazing in this picture...gorgeous. I think they somewhat over processed your skin tone...but it's minor and you look outstanding here. 4. Worst image I chose this as your worst for a couple of reasons..see your hair? See how there is no definition in the strands? you should be able to see texture in hair....I don't know if a lighting issue happened here or a processing issue....but either way it's distracting. Also the expression on your face seems like you were going for a shy sheepsih look, but it kinda comes off as..."nervous" Know what I mean? Also with your body type, I would consider doing this shot a bit different in the pose...place one foot in front of the other or actually cross them as you stand and kick one of your hips out...it adds to the shape of the female form. 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute tattoo 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. Every now and then I open a port and I say "wow"...not because of the images alone, but because there's this gem of a pretty lady looking back....Wow...you're gorgeous Also, consider ditching the escort/chaperone policy....you're 32....you can make your own judgment on who you should and should not shoot with. I know this will never be a settled issue...but wanted to toss it out there.
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raychel
Posts: 225
Charleston, South Carolina, US
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
ivcity wrote: Please tell me your opinion 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: 4. Worst image not a horrible picture really...just my least fav in your current port. 5. Best Physical Attribute eyes 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...seems to have a ball at the tip 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images.I like them...like to see both studo and non studio shots....remember, the camera picks up everything....so when you squint your eyes because of the sun, your eyes appear to be smaller becuse they are partically closed...I know it's not easy to keep your eyes open when you are looking into the sun...consider trying to keep your eyes open....have the photog count 1, 2, 3 and then open your eyes.that way, they are open for minimal time, hopefully they are fully open and it let's you both know when the shot should be taken. That sometimes helps.
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KristianaRose
Posts: 585
Denver, Colorado, US
I have a feeling that if I don't post again my port will be lost in the pages! : ) So sure, please be brutally honest!
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Terra R Morgan wrote: Im very interested. What do you think. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10:7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image flat color tones, no physical depth shown, just 5. Best Physical Attribute love the hair...the way it frames your face. 6. Worst Physical attribute hair....yeah I know...how can that be. you have to be careful with colored hair...if it's not kept up, you get the two tone kinda of thing going on as you have here. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. like the diversity...would like to see something more "glam/sexy" from you as well as something darker and creepier.
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Alexis Nichole
Posts: 1028
Upland, California, US
I'd like to hear what you think! Thank you in advance (either way haha)
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Kristiana Miller wrote: I have a feeling that if I don't post again my port will be lost in the pages! : ) So sure, please be brutally honest! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/0 … 015e36.jpg 18+ I understand when models/photogs only show the body....it's an artsitic choice...but this one....your head is chopped right in half...I assume that was dont to hide your face?!?!? I just don't get it. nice body, lovely breasts, but why hide the face?!?!? 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute nose....it seems to have a ball at the tip 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA (Girl with Big Boobs / Round Ass) (Akin to GWC) 9 General thoughts on your images. I am pleased to see you will shoot a variety of shots....you should understnad that shooting in front of a camera is different than posing for a still drawing class or painting class....you need to move, relax, express, just different. Also, while I appreciate the paying issue, don't forget to take on TF work as well...you don't want to miss an opportunity to shoot with someone who can create a great shot over $$.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
raychill K wrote: If you have the time.... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … f2da24.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image over all not a bad bad image, but just kinda ehh as compared to the others in your port. At first I wasn't a fan of the somewhat muted tones, then I though...yeah I kinda dig the muted tones, but something is missing...to be honest, I don't know what it is, but somethign is missing. 5. Best Physical Attribute over all incredibly toned body 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...would like to see thinner/tapered 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. OK, you obvisouly have a great body and it's perfect for figure studies/artistic nudes, so step out of the safety area and try some classic pinup....I think it would be fun for you and you would love the results.
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Adrienne M Plus
Posts: 194
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
yes we can all thank MM for their lousy server problems for the delay!! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image: you look absolutely amazing in this picture...gorgeous. I think they somewhat over processed your skin tone...but it's minor and you look outstanding here. 4. Worst image I chose this as your worst for a couple of reasons..see your hair? See how there is no definition in the strands? you should be able to see texture in hair....I don't know if a lighting issue happened here or a processing issue....but either way it's distracting. Also the expression on your face seems like you were going for a shy sheepsih look, but it kinda comes off as..."nervous" Know what I mean? Also with your body type, I would consider doing this shot a bit different in the pose...place one foot in front of the other or actually cross them as you stand and kick one of your hips out...it adds to the shape of the female form. 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute tattoo 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. Every now and then I open a port and I say "wow"...not because of the images alone, but because there's this gem of a pretty lady looking back....Wow...you're gorgeous Also, consider ditching the escort/chaperone policy....you're 32....you can make your own judgment on who you should and should not shoot with. I know this will never be a settled issue...but wanted to toss it out there.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Alexis Nichole wrote: I'd like to hear what you think! Thank you in advance (either way haha) I about died when I saw how old you are...I feel like a dity old man! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 9.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 9 (My feet are getting hot for the flames of hell coming to get me! 3. Best image: this image is all about how you look in that bikini...and you look outstanding. 4. Worst image I chose this as your worst because it just fails...you look great, the dress, the hair, the accessories, the MU, the location, all individually look great....but the pose just looks..well posed...I think it you would have had a look of a "long walk to clear your head" thing going on in the exact same location, time, wardrobe, etc it would have been much better. 5. Best Physical Attribute this was hard...your gorgeous. I am going to have to say tushie. 6. Worst Physical attribute nose is a teenie weenie bit wide. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images.you have 99% strong images over all. there was one that was spot on but I thought it was over processed. is the one I was talking about. hair, MU, pose/coffee cup/lighting, etc...perfection..then it was over processed...skin looks plastic like. you are physically about as perfect as one can be.
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raychel
Posts: 225
Charleston, South Carolina, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … f2da24.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image over all not a bad bad image, but just kinda ehh as compared to the others in your port. At first I wasn't a fan of the somewhat muted tones, then I though...yeah I kinda dig the muted tones, but something is missing...to be honest, I don't know what it is, but somethign is missing. 5. Best Physical Attribute over all incredibly toned body 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...would like to see thinner/tapered 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. OK, you obvisouly have a great body and it's perfect for figure studies/artistic nudes, so step out of the safety area and try some classic pinup....I think it would be fun for you and you would love the results. Wow, what a quick response! Thank you so very much for your time and input!
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Alexis Nichole
Posts: 1028
Upland, California, US
Thank you very much! that was a big critique I like my tushie too haha & I hate my nose too lol hi 5 on your calls - you da man!! hahaha Thank you for all your time, I'll keep workin' on it!! Have a Happy,healthy 2010!!
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Michalla Valdez
Posts: 2
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
Im a newbie on MM and would love it if you gave my port a whirl... THANKS
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Aderial
Posts: 233
Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, US
I guess i got skipped as well.... oh well.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Aderial wrote: I guess i got skipped as well.... oh well. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: like the emotion in this one 4. Worst image not really a bad image, but it's just kinda ehhh...as compared to the others 5. Best Physical Attribute cleavage is nice 6. Worst Physical attribute eyes...let me explain....actually I think you have nice eyes, but you seem to choose (or the MUA chooses) eye MU that just kills your eyes...they get washed out..MU should generally accent the natural beauty of the person. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA 9 General thoughts on your images. glad to see the diversity, glad to see some casual, some dress, some sexy, etc. Work with as many photos as you can, and learn from each of them....you'll find little tips and triack as you go along that will ultimately improve both your work, and future photographer's work.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Miche Ryder wrote: Im a newbie on MM and would love it if you gave my port a whirl... THANKS 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute hair is great 6. Worst Physical attribute hard to really get a great look...it appears as though you upper lip is a bit thin...but since the images are not big enough to really tell, I might be wrong 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. I think you're an attractive woman and I can't wait to see more stuff from you.a lot of the images look like they were taken with a point and Shoot camera...just a pop up flash...that's too bad...with the right photog you could create amazing images.
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Ebony Blutengel
Posts: 11
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Im new and love hearing opinions of more experienced people out there. I'd like to play.
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Aderial
Posts: 233
Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: like the emotion in this one 4. Worst image not really a bad image, but it's just kinda ehhh...as compared to the others 5. Best Physical Attribute cleavage is nice 6. Worst Physical attribute eyes...let me explain....actually I think you have nice eyes, but you seem to choose (or the MUA chooses) eye MU that just kills your eyes...they get washed out..MU should generally accent the natural beauty of the person. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA 9 General thoughts on your images. glad to see the diversity, glad to see some casual, some dress, some sexy, etc. Work with as many photos as you can, and learn from each of them....you'll find little tips and triack as you go along that will ultimately improve both your work, and future photographer's work. thanks i was thinking about taking that one off any way, glad to know that someone else agrees
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Kelly Her
Posts: 40
Fresno, California, US
Oh...i got skipped..My turn?
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Kate Jenkins
Posts: 31
Yelm, Washington, US
I would love to know your opinion(:
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Alycia M
Posts: 38
Fort Bragg, North Carolina, US
i was skipped on page 9
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Aurelia Luna
Posts: 35
Carrollton, Georgia, US
I think we are working backwards now? I was on page 9 as well...::confused::
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Ebony Blutengel wrote: Im new and love hearing opinions of more experienced people out there. I'd like to play. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image: this AVI, in my opinion is heads and tails above the others in your ports...it's soft, it's sensual, it's alluring and flirtatious. 4. Worst image I chose thias as your worst fro a couple of reasons...1, I hate hand bras...there are so many other ways to do implied nudes without using a hand bra....hate hand bras. Also, the vacant look on your face/expressions looks like you just didn't want ot be there taking that shot. 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute I know you aren't going to like this answer, but it's your tats 7. Listable? nothing in my currnet lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. Keepl working on shooting with different photogaphers...each tog has their own way of doing things, own way of lighting, own way of posing, interacting, etc.and over time you will find what works and what doesn't work for you. I would love to see you do some classic pinup work. When all you have, ultimately, is a head shot, your facial expression is vital to a good image. A model cannot generally get away with a vacant look on their face. There is a difference between vacant and non focused. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Kelly Her wrote: Oh...i got skipped..My turn? 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image as compared to the others, it's just kinda ehh....also the fac that yoru hair belds into the background was a downer for me...not physical depth to the image...can't see the background behind you....it's almost as if you are flat against the background...should generally be able to see some depth unless it is intentional to be against the background and there's a purpose. 5. Best Physical Attribute lips 6. Worst Physical attribute hard to tell...nothing jumps off the page at me, but with the limited number of photos and the wardrobe choices/frames, it makes it hard to see anything. (no, you don't have to show stuff!)...just don't want to write soemthing down to just fill the space, so I'll reserve comment on this one 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images.like your classic look...would htink you would have a blast doing some classic pinup work. give it a try. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Mandie Mayhem wrote: did I get skipped? 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image out of focus and lighting is not doing anything to light your face. 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts...while I can't actually see them, they seem to have a nice shape and size behind that axe. 6. Worst Physical attribute nose seems a bit wide. 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror. Keep up the work you are doing. Have fun and relax at your shoots. Seek out as many photogs as you can. Every tog has a different way of doing things. The way he/she uses the lights, props, surroundings, poses, etc. You will find things that work for you and things that do not work for you. Learn from each experienceâ¦take the good and bad and make your own styleâ¦learn how to position your body to be the most flattering, how to place your head, your expressions, etcâ¦always learn from the experiences.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Nikkivante2 wrote: I believe I am ready... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image: 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute lips 6. Worst Physical attribute forehead 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA on the fence here...your port has been on MM for a short while, but only a handful of images....but yet you have all of these demands...that you MUST get this and you MUST have this right...it's a turn off and automatically makes a lot of photogs think..DIVA and not even consider shooting with you. There's a difference between being careful and over playing your hand. 9 General thoughts on your images. Need to see more from you. Strange that I only see 6 images and your account has been active since September of last year. you seem to be able to display some attitude/sassiness in your images which is a good thing. Keep up the work you are doing. Have fun and relax at your shoots. Seek out as many photogs as you can. Every tog has a different way of doing things. The way he/she uses the lights, props, surroundings, poses, etc. You will find things that work for you and things that do not work for you. Learn from each experienceâ¦take the good and bad and make your own styleâ¦learn how to position your body to be the most flattering, how to place your head, your expressions, etcâ¦always learn from the experiences.
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LucyS
Posts: 398
Fredericton, New Brunswick, Canada
haven't been on the critique forum in a while, i'd love to hear what you think.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Mizz Amanda Marie wrote: me too! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … e04666.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute nice breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute piercings in your face 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
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Michalla Valdez
Posts: 2
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
Thanks so much for your honesty. Yeah I have a thin upper lip, genetics Im afraid. I will work on posing so that the majority of whats there can be seen, without looking too fishy... LOL Thanks again for your comments Much appreciated!
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