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xX ReD Xx
Posts: 243
Raymond, Mississippi, US
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B-Bravo
Posts: 110
Corpus Christi, Texas, US
I want to play. Hit me with your best shot
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GingerBedlam
Posts: 72
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 (your work is more artistic than sexy...that's not bad, just different) 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute nice boobs 6. Worst Physical attribute hard to say...the images are rather small, so it's not easy to see any markers on the face....so rather than guess, I'll reserve comment. 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. would just like to see more images....hard to really make in sincere comments with the limited # of pics. Keep at it, have fun and inject some of your own personality into the images. Thanks a bunch!
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Courtney LaCroix wrote: Are you still playing this game? I want to play.... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
just bad all around...it's a shame because you have a nice body, but this iamge is just bad. 5. Best Physical Attribute great lips (nice hair too) 6. Worst Physical attribute nose is a bit wide up top 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. like the diversity...you have a gorgeous face...very pretty. I think you would be killer at vintage pin up work... Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Red Oswalt wrote: i'll bite =] 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 9.5...you're smoking hot. 3. Best image:
I might have reversed the legs....bent the front leg and staightened the back leg, but over all it's pretty hot. 4. Worst image
out of focus, posed, just not a good shot...not even close in quality to the others in your port 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute nose has a little ball at the tip 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. you're hot....would like to see a high fashion/evening gown shoot with you...also think you could do a killer job at pin up work.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
B-Bravo wrote: I want to play. Hit me with your best shot 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
just not flattering to your legs at all. 5. Best Physical Attribute abs 6. Worst Physical attribute tattoo 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. like them...prune some of the bad shots...for example, your AVI is pretty hot...the pic I chose as your worst is not flattering to you at all....all ofyour iamges should flatter your shape/face/body, etc.
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JaimieLynn
Posts: 40
Arroyo Grande, California, US
Me please if you are still going.
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allisonw
Posts: 15
Fredericksburg, Virginia, US
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Just Jewles wrote: i could use a critique 1. Physical Beauty 1-10:7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image:
like this top down look...like the shallow DOF to give teh soft focus on the breasts...well done 4. Worst image
out of focus, soft, not lit well, blotchy paper...bad. 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...kinda short and stubby 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. like them...you're all woman and I find you pretty hot. like the diverse nature of the shots, would like to see some sheer mateiral used against your body...some classic boudoir shots.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
allisonw wrote: skipped again:-( no you were not skipped again....there's a method to my order....but alas, here we go. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 3. Best image:
it's not the best executed technically, but from your "job", I think it's the best...nice post, classic lines, well done 4. Worst image
not good ...bad shot in general 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts...seem to have a nice size and shape 6. Worst Physical attribute your hair...here's why...when you hair is lit properly and it's has a nice healthy shine to it...it's great...but a couple of shots, the hair looks dull and lifeless....so it's good and bad 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. try to shoot with as many photogs as you can...mix it up. All photogs see things differently...different styles, preferences, etc.
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Alice Donoghue
Posts: 117
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
I'm down to play! Let me know what you think ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Lovebones
Posts: 356
Roswell, Georgia, US
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laralara
Posts: 302
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Alice Donoghue wrote: I'm down to play! Let me know what you think ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute pretyt over all face... 6. Worst Physical attribute too thin....your arms and legs lack shape and definition because of the weight. 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. can't wait to see more...would like to see see something dark and mysterous from you.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
tiffany cliche wrote: Mee! :] 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute legs 6. Worst Physical attribute expressions...see below 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA on the fence...you bio/requirements screams diva 9 General thoughts on your images.they are all the same....yeah, the wardrobe changes, but your interaction and your expression is always the same. Find a way to interact with the camera...engage it, inter twine with the camera...the blank expression is holding you back.
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
laralara wrote: Shoot:) 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 8 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 40bfd0.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute breasts...they are perfect in every way. 6. Worst Physical attribute I am going to reserve comment here...reason is, in all of the images there really is not a clear shot fo your face...that doesn't mean the face is bad IMO, it just means I can't really see it to form an opinion. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. think you have a great body...and probably a gorgeous face...but as noted above, not real clear shots of the face. you seem to have the artsy body work down...would like to see some standard glam stuff from you as well.
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Victoria Shirley
Posts: 208
Cambridge, England, United Kingdom
I'd like to know ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Alycia M
Posts: 38
Fort Bragg, North Carolina, US
definatly interested please
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Aswald
Posts: 3471
Detroit, Michigan, US
I wanna play ![big_smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/big_smile.png)
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Alice Donoghue
Posts: 117
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Thanks alot for the critique!
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Rhiannon Fields
Posts: 5
Los Angeles, California, US
Let me have your best! ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Rhiannon Fields wrote: Let me have your best! ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png) 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute legs are lovely 6. Worst Physical attribute nose is a bit wide up top...not enough taper 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images.not many to look at right now, I am somewaht surprised...your bio suggests that you have been a model for a long tome, but yet the port is brand new and the images that you have up are kinda ehh....maybe I am misreading the bio...but that's how it comes off. you have an amazing body for sure...legs, breasts, hips, abs, pretty face...branch out...make your images say something...you have a nice look but it seems to be more for artistic and drama than staright glam...
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Angelica Aswald wrote: I wanna play ![big_smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/big_smile.png) 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image:
I like the soft expression in this one 4. Worst image
not focused, framed wrong, dead expression, colors are flat... 5. Best Physical Attribute shapely legs 6. Worst Physical attribute the dreads need to go 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists. 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA models that are as new as you are, by your own "no experience" note should not be charging at all....even models who pose nude need to know how to pose...it's not all about tits and ass....it's about elegance and grace as well....for that reason I am going to say GWBB 9 General thoughts on your images. not many photos to really look at...and I know it's a new port...just wish there was more to see...the ones that are there are bad...colors are flat, poses is rough, framed strangely..just off. two more things....stop brining escorts...photogs are not rapists...would you bring an escort to a secretarial job or an accounting job or a nursing job, doctor job? Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
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Kelly Her
Posts: 40
Fresno, California, US
Hi! Im new and would appreciate more help! Thanks! -Kelly
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Vee Kaye
Posts: 96
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia
i want to play! ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Kaitlyn M
Posts: 242
Burbank, California, US
Very interested to hear your input. Thank you
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Kelly Green Crume
Posts: 4
Lexington, Kentucky, US
I got skipped on page 6. If you have time...
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Kelly Green Crume wrote: I got skipped on page 6. If you have time... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
5. Best Physical Attribute nice full lips 6. Worst Physical attribute nose seems a bitt off near the tip 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. shoot with as many photogs as you can. SImplybecause each photog does something different and has different techniques..plus any experience is a good experience....or at least can help you understand what a shoot is like and how to improve...even shoots that end in bad pictures should be a learning experience....why were the shots bad? (I'm speaking generally, not about your current iamges)...who knows...maybe there was some tension between you and the photog...maybe the two of you weren't gelling, maybe the wardrobe didn't fit right, maybe the lights were off, maybe, maybe, maybe. Point is, learn from it so in the future you will know how to avoid it. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
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Sarah Ivie
Posts: 67
WEST BLOOMFIELD, Michigan, US
I would like your opinion
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J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Kaitlyn M wrote: Very interested to hear your input. Thank you 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image:
4. Worst image
not all that bad, but as compared to the others it falls flat. Colors/depth of color is a bit flat as well (yes I know it's somewhat monotone in nature) 5. Best Physical Attribute nice eyes 6. Worst Physical attribute I am going to reserve comment on this one....while not a criticism, all of your images pretty much cover your entire body wardrobe, so that makes it diffcult to form such an opinion. (yes I know there are a couple of shots that show some leg)...so rather than just pick something at random, I will just not comment here. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. like the doverse wardrobe/locations, but I noticed the same expression in almost every image. If that is what you were going for, then great....but mix it up a little...smile, smirk, frown, whimsical, lost in thought, sexy, whatever...just add something to the image other than the pretty face.
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Blushes
Posts: 150
Walnut Creek, California, US
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Lily Avengale
Posts: 762
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Go a head ![smile](//assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/smile.png)
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Em Chameleon
Posts: 17
Ridley Park, Pennsylvania, US
i will play give your full opinion
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KristianaRose
Posts: 585
Denver, Colorado, US
Alright then. Please, be brutally honest.
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Aderial
Posts: 233
Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, US
if you are still going i would love to know what you think
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Vanessa Lake
Posts: 138
Los Angeles, California, US
I'm game, even though i do have big boobs and a round ass hahaha
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Jesl16
Posts: 18
Phoenix, Arizona, US
oh, I like this one alot... i'm very intrigued to find out the honest truth....
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Amira_
Posts: 280
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
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xELSYx
Posts: 1
I would like to play....Btw I think your honesty is great even if Im not gunna like what you say x
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