Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
if that's true, it's kinda sad.  Your heart and mind is what should make you who you are.

Its everything that makes me ME...my heart, my mind, my scars, my tattoos. Its eveything. Obviously my heart and mind too.

I dont expect everyone to like my tattoos.

SarahRE wrote:
Me please

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


fram is off, colors are flat, but from your point of view, you look a bit nervous in this shot...relax and have fun...yes I know it's easier said than done.
5.  Best Physical Attribute breasts/cleavage
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose....would like to see it taper a bit more.
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the start...like to see the box shots...soemething different that the ordinary.  Relax and have fun, try to inject more of your personality into each image.  Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

RAF Sparkennoodle wrote:
Me plz

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute nice lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose a bit broad...
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images.like the diversity even with the limited numbers...most of my concerns with the images come from lighting problems which really isn't your issu......so, relax, have fun, shoot with as many photogs as possible.

Emily i wrote:
Want to know what you think... I have upgraded my port a bit.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:

hands down my fav...makes my hair sweat!
4.  Worst image

reason I chose this one is because of the vacant look on the face...great pose, great movement in the dress, nicely lit, framed well...etc, but the expression is just kinda...ehh..
5.  Best Physical Attribute legs and tushie
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose is a bit wide...maybe it's the shadows?
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like them...you pose very well...slight foot placement changes really help accentuate the tushie and thighs..well done.  Love the hair and the wave it has in it.  Do something that shows off your personality.

Baby Bethany wrote:
I would love your feedback!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image
http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … d03e1a.jpg
18+
nothing but a boob shot....

5.  Best Physical Attribute lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose...a bit wide
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA  on the fence here.
9  General thoughts on your images. noticed that most of your shots are the same look....Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

If you really want to be a "model", then don't rely on youre breasts to get the shot...(yes you have nice breasts), but breasts only go so far in life.  Work with different wardrobes, different locations, themes, etc....you can still show the cleavage and breasts if you choose, but have a purpose other than some photog just shooting them.  Know what I mean?

Rebecca Smith wrote:

I was skipped on page 2 new years eve!! poo

Sorry for the skip....

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10:
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10
3.  Best image:

would have liked to see a bit more light on your face, but that's just a minor thing.
4.  Worst image

not flattering to you at all...bad bad bad
5.  Best Physical Attribute big eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute thin lips
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the diversity thus far...now it's times to do two things...1 relax and perfect your skiills/expressions/poses, etc....and 2, get more involved with photos....more extreme wardrobe, locations, settings, props, etc...tell a story.
Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Melinda Samudio wrote:
...*breathe* I Think I can take it

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

you look a bit stiff...you're gorgeous...smile, all eyes are on you...or at least should be....
5.  Best Physical Attribute lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute apparently a flat tushie
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. you are lovely....trully a beautiful woman.
Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Find a photog who will take some time and get you about 5 really nice shots....you have a natural beauty that can only get better with the right photog.

HannahRyan wrote:
I'd like to play!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

love the hair, love the dres...nice legs, etc...cute pearl necklace/bracelet thing...but what's with the mattress and it's out of focus.
5.  Best Physical Attribute
6.  Worst Physical attribute
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images.try to branch out and shoot with a variety of photogs....everybody does things a little bit different and have different perspectives on things....shoot as often as you can and experiment with poses, expressions and wardrove.

KellyTurrill wrote:
i'm extremely amateur. good luck :S

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:

pretty little grin here....cute lady
4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute lips
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose...has a hook at the end
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images.
you're a pretty young lady....shoot with as many photogs as you can and remember that you can smile now and then.  express yourself...act like you're singing in the shower...nobody can hear you and nobody can see you...so over act the poses until you get comforatble with things.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

DarcieK wrote:
Think I was missed. I"m on page 2 or 3. I'm still a newbie so this should be interesting

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

poorly lit, too much black....
5.  Best Physical Attribute seem to have nice and ample breasts
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose appears to be a bit wide...but hard to tell as so many shots are far off from the face.
7.  Listable? nothing in my currnet lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the injected personality in the shots....epxress yourself....shoot with as many people as you can and learn from each one of htem...things you like, things you dislike, etc  and as you go on, incorporate what you like/dislike into the future shoots.

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


fram is off, colors are flat, but from your point of view, you look a bit nervous in this shot...relax and have fun...yes I know it's easier said than done.
5.  Best Physical Attribute breasts/cleavage
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose....would like to see it taper a bit more.
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the start...like to see the box shots...soemething different that the ordinary.  Relax and have fun, try to inject more of your personality into each image.  Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Thank you! Excellent advice

Glamorous Glynnis wrote:
may I play?

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

so many colors, but the shot is flat...tones are off.
5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute thin lips
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the body parts shots...like the ssmoke in the air from the cigs....nice little concepts...keep working and tell a story in the images.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 6.5
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

so many colors, but the shot is flat...tones are off.
5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute thin lips
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the body parts shots...like the ssmoke in the air from the cigs....nice little concepts...keep working and tell a story in the images.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Thank you for the review, and the email letting me know
I'm actually surprised and happy you said my lips, because I hate my nose lol.
I'll definitely take your advice on the expressions!

Miss Bloxham wrote:
maow, I was skipped

Sorry you were skipped!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6 (Expressions and posing need work...see below)
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

a bit blown out and the expression/angles lack dramatic appeal that would otherwise work well with the blown out look.

5.  Best Physical Attribute great eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose looks a bit wide
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. can't really make any comments on body shots because most of your shots are either head shots or the pose limits visuals on the body. (not that does not mean you have to be nude to see the body...)think you have a nice fresh face and your even skin tone would allow lots of looks with MU changes.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Hillary Devi R wrote:
skipped on page 3... then again on 4 the first time I said "skipped" lolz

I skipped you twice?  Well that's just wrong wrong wrog.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 9
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 8
3.  Best image:
http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 7506e4.jpg
18+
I chose this as my fav because it's clean and simple...sometimes that's all that is needed...just a clean simple shot.  Well done. (nice tushit too!)

4.  Worst image

too much sun light popping through and leaving hot spots everywhere....soft focus, kinda looks like a snapshot....just kinda eeehhhh compared to the others.
5.  Best Physical Attribute tushie is really nice and love the hair
6.  Worst Physical attribute  can't really find anything....you're really a beautiful woman. when you do the darker make up, it kinda kills your eyes....
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the variety, like the BW and color, like the darker looks and the lighter looks. (I prefer the lighter looks with you)  Over all you're an incredibly beautiful woman.

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

I skipped you twice?  Well that's just wrong wrong wrog.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 9
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 8
3.  Best image:
http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 7506e4.jpg
18+
I chose this as my fav because it's clean and simple...sometimes that's all that is needed...just a clean simple shot.  Well done. (nice tushit too!)

4.  Worst image

too much sun light popping through and leaving hot spots everywhere....soft focus, kinda looks like a snapshot....just kinda eeehhhh compared to the others.
5.  Best Physical Attribute tushie is really nice and love the hair
6.  Worst Physical attribute  can't really find anything....you're really a beautiful woman. when you do the darker make up, it kinda kills your eyes....
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. like the variety, like the BW and color, like the darker looks and the lighter looks. (I prefer the lighter looks with you)  Over all you're an incredibly beautiful woman.

Thanks so much!!! Your critique was well worth the wait

You've really made my day... and the "snapshot" is gonner

Ciao! xoxo

Joseph Reed Photography wrote:

Sorry you were skipped!

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6 (Expressions and posing need work...see below)
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

a bit blown out and the expression/angles lack dramatic appeal that would otherwise work well with the blown out look.

5.  Best Physical Attribute great eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose looks a bit wide
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. can't really make any comments on body shots because most of your shots are either head shots or the pose limits visuals on the body. (not that does not mean you have to be nude to see the body...)think you have a nice fresh face and your even skin tone would allow lots of looks with MU changes.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

Great advice which I will be sure to take on board, thanks very much!

allison mindy wrote:
I would like to play please.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

post work is bad...does nothing for you at all
5.  Best Physical Attribute breasts
6.  Worst Physical attribute nose does not seem to taper much at all.
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model
9  General thoughts on your images. you are a lovely woman....I noticed that some of the images in your port are nice and others are just poor...I know how that happens, and I know that I have the same problem with my port...pretty eyes and nice skin tone.  I noticed that several of your images have the same basic expression...make some changes a little bit...you have a gorgeous head of hair....I prefer it down with a little wave to it...when you pull it up and tight it's kinda like a playboy model wearing clothes...it takes away a beauty point....love the hair.

Mandee Varela wrote:
I am scared ! Lol
But, I am in

Mandee

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 8
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 7
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image

not a really bad shot, but as compared to the others it' kinda ...ehh
5.  Best Physical Attribute eyes
6.  Worst Physical attribute flat tushie
7.  Listable? yes and have
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. like what I see...like that you have miced it up a little bit.  Expressions are what set models apart....most models on here are pretty....but it takes energy and emotion to really sell an image.

Might I suggest the following?  Go out and purchase a few magazines…Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesn’t really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face.  I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own.  Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressions…sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc.  Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.

GingerBedlam wrote:
I'll play.

1.  Physical Beauty 1-10: 7
2.  Sex Appeal 1-10 6 (your work is more artistic than sexy...that's not bad, just different)
3.  Best image:


4.  Worst image


5.  Best Physical Attribute nice boobs
6.  Worst Physical attribute hard to say...the images are rather small, so it's not easy to see any markers on the face....so rather than guess, I'll reserve comment.
7.  Listable? nothing in my current lists
8.  Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model
9  General thoughts on your images. would just like to see more images....hard to really make in sincere comments with the limited # of pics.  Keep at it, have fun and inject some of your own personality into the images.