Forums > Critique > 2am NYC time... time for a (brutal) critique

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

what do I think of your portfolio? respond here and i'll let you know!
if i think your work sucks, i'll tell you. if i like it, i'll tell you.

Apr 06 08 02:09 am Link

Model

Sweet Showtime

Posts: 555

Los Angeles, California, US

I would like to know your thoughts.

Apr 06 08 02:22 am Link

Photographer

MegaHertz Studios

Posts: 252

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

missjenny wrote:
what do I think of your portfolio? respond here and i'll let you know!

Go ahead. Let me have it.

Apr 06 08 02:29 am Link

Photographer

SD Photo

Posts: 283

Lancaster, Pennsylvania, US

i cant sleep so go ahead... tell me what you think.

Apr 06 08 02:32 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Tashaney Roberson wrote:
I would like to know your thoughts.

you're really cute
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080204/18/47a7a019d9caa.jpg
is my favorite

Apr 06 08 02:32 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

MegaHertz Studios wrote:

Go ahead. Let me have it.

interesting port. lovely avatar. though i think your nudes look run-of-the-mill.

Apr 06 08 02:34 am Link

Photographer

Justin Kates

Posts: 361

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

You can beat me up if you want. Who knows when I will get tired...

Apr 06 08 02:34 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Sam Dixon  wrote:
i cant sleep so go ahead... tell me what you think.

the girl with the ginormous boobs took the "classiness" of your port down 45 percent.
i don't know if you're going for the classy look, but she's messing it up.

Apr 06 08 02:35 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Justin Kates wrote:
You can beat me up if you want. Who knows when I will get tired...

you make lovely goth/fetish photos. the avatar is really interesting. it kind of freaks me out, but i like it... very creative. very nice overall!

Apr 06 08 02:37 am Link

Photographer

Jay Farrell

Posts: 13408

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Sure, have at it smile

Apr 06 08 02:37 am Link

Photographer

Tiffany S Photography

Posts: 418

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'd appreciate some critique smile

Apr 06 08 02:37 am Link

Photographer

Iris Takes Pictures II

Posts: 4961

Palm Springs, California, US

Why not? Thanks.

Apr 06 08 02:38 am Link

Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 130

Columbia, Alabama, US

Why not...

Apr 06 08 02:38 am Link

Photographer

John Ferrentino

Posts: 620

Merritt Island, Florida, US

one ny to another go for it.

Apr 06 08 02:39 am Link

Photographer

Justin Kates

Posts: 361

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

missjenny wrote:

you make lovely goth/fetish photos. the avatar is really interesting. it kind of freaks me out, but i like it... very creative. very nice overall!

Wow thank you. big_smile

Apr 06 08 02:40 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Jay Farrell wrote:
Sure, have at it smile

lovely port. BUT there are a few pics that don't seem to fit in with the rest. namely: orange background with beach ball. blue bikini shot on the beach. half naked girl on the bike. they take away from the overall aesthetic value of your port. the rest are lovely and creative

Apr 06 08 02:40 am Link

Photographer

MB Photography

Posts: 769

Paradise Valley, Arizona, US

Alright,  let me have it!

Apr 06 08 02:40 am Link

Photographer

TrickProductions

Posts: 114

Miami, Florida, US

Do me next : )

Wow that sounds pretty bad when I read it outloud. lol

Apr 06 08 02:41 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Tiffany S Photography wrote:
I'd appreciate some critique smile

you have a very artistic port that i like a lot. i love the avatar... there's a look of loneliness in her eyes. you don't just shoot people for the hell of it. each of your photos tells a story. good job!

Apr 06 08 02:42 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Non Toxic Photography wrote:
Why not? Thanks.

i read a thread you posted somewhere else about the pics to ad to your port. you added my least favorite one. i don't like the one of the girl in the air, where it looks like she is jumping over an imaginary jumprope. i think you are a good photographer that needs to fine tune his skills. overall very good, though i don't feel the models at all.

Apr 06 08 02:43 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

FootNote Fotography wrote:
Why not...

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080301/13/47c9a309924e8.jpg
this picture is too blurry and too dark.
otherwise, take more photos. i'll get back to you on that smile~~

Apr 06 08 02:45 am Link

Photographer

FemQua Productions

Posts: 353

Atlanta, Georgia, US

i'd love to know

Apr 06 08 02:46 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

John Ferrentino wrote:
one ny to another go for it.

i think you make lovely fashion/headshots. keep working at it... i'm not so sure about the bikini shots. and the picture of the girl in the big hat doesn't cut it.

Apr 06 08 02:47 am Link

Model

Aurora Natrix

Posts: 458

Miami, Florida, US

sure let me have it. thanks!

Apr 06 08 02:47 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

MB Photography wrote:
Alright,  let me have it!

there's not much i can find wrong with your port!
i love your beauty shots... great job!
i make it to scottsdale from time to time so i would def look you up for a photographer i'd like to work with.

Apr 06 08 02:49 am Link

Retoucher

WeathermanGFX

Posts: 46

Tampa, Florida, US

hmm i dont have a big port but go ahead if ya want smile

Apr 06 08 02:49 am Link

Photographer

John Ferrentino

Posts: 620

Merritt Island, Florida, US

missjenny wrote:

i think you make lovely fashion/headshots. keep working at it... i'm not so sure about the bikini shots. and the picture of the girl in the big hat doesn't cut it.

The picture off the girl in the Big Hat was for a national ad for Comic relief in England!  So that is why it was posted.

Apr 06 08 02:50 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

TrickProductions wrote:
Do me next : )

Wow that sounds pretty bad when I read it outloud. lol

i like the avatar and the dark/light contrast photos. the other ones aren't really my cup of tea. they look average and run of the mill.

Apr 06 08 02:50 am Link

Photographer

steve prue

Posts: 785

Brooklyn, New York, US

oo!  i just got back from covering Paul Booth's art opening...and sitting here with my knee on ice plus a beer in hand.  hit me!

Apr 06 08 02:52 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

FemQua Productions wrote:
i'd love to know

i love the series of the guy on the blue car.
i think your profile would benefit if you use some different models.
overall very good!

Apr 06 08 02:52 am Link

Photographer

John Ferrentino

Posts: 620

Merritt Island, Florida, US

John Ferrentino wrote:

The picture off the girl in the Big Hat was for a national ad for Comic relief in England!  So that is why it was posted.

What does NY/Paris  New york mean anyway ?    Or is it Paris New York ?  Like long Island NY

Apr 06 08 02:53 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

AurorA NatriX wrote:
sure let me have it. thanks!

you have a beautiful face and you are a great pin up model. but i think the pictures with the wigs distract from your natural beauty. i would peace them out

Apr 06 08 02:53 am Link

Photographer

Tiffany S Photography

Posts: 418

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

missjenny wrote:

you have a very artistic port that i like a lot. i love the avatar... there's a look of loneliness in her eyes. you don't just shoot people for the hell of it. each of your photos tells a story. good job!

Thank you ♥

You have a lovely portfolio yourself, I love the black and whites and the last photo in your portfolio smile

Apr 06 08 02:53 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

WeathermanGFX wrote:
hmm i dont have a big port but go ahead if ya want smile

very creative!
you need more stuff, but keep shooting. looks good so far.

Apr 06 08 02:54 am Link

Model

Emilia T

Posts: 91

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Please smile

Apr 06 08 02:54 am Link

Photographer

John Ferrentino

Posts: 620

Merritt Island, Florida, US

missjenny
Female
25 years old
new york/paris, New York   ( What does this line even mean ??????????????????)

Apr 06 08 02:55 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

steve prue wrote:
oo!  i just got back from covering Paul Booth's art opening...and sitting here with my knee on ice plus a beer in hand.  hit me!

your port is really creative and the model in your avatar is beautiful.
i love post shoot effects you have on your photos. (photoshop)
good job... if you need a model, look me up. hehe

Apr 06 08 02:56 am Link

Photographer

MB Photography

Posts: 769

Paradise Valley, Arizona, US

missjenny wrote:

there's not much i can find wrong with your port!
i love your beauty shots... great job!
i make it to scottsdale from time to time so i would def look you up for a photographer i'd like to work with.

I appreciate the kind words!  Have a great night

Apr 06 08 02:56 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Emilia T wrote:
Please smile

your beauty shots are gorgeous!
great work, keep shooting. smile

Apr 06 08 02:57 am Link

Model

Jennifer Tyler

Posts: 532

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

John Ferrentino wrote:
missjenny
Female
25 years old
new york/paris, New York   ( What does this line even mean ??????????????????)

oh sorry if it's a little ambiguous. i live in new york, but i travel to paris, france often.

Apr 06 08 02:57 am Link