Krissy Topaz wrote:
Wondering what you think my best would be?

First impressions: You look great beautiful stats.
Your Skill level: beginner with soul
Your money shot: (meaning best)
Your Work focus: should be fashion glamor, port suggest random attempts.
What I don't like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35215478

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35085205 busy foreground tend to disappear inside busy background (photographer/retoucher incompetence)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35085171 redundant
Verdict: try to focus on what you want to accomplish. Posing in images that just tells a story (per your profile info) will not pay bills. Be goal oriented.

varton wrote:

Hello Hellen
You may be new to modeling but you motivated me to skip 3 pages full of people waiting for their review and forward my thought LOL

Some will claim your height can be a handicap but everything else looks top to me.
You have a great body language, natural beauty, hypnotizing ethnic (Armenian) eyes and nose. You will do great but must really learn the ropes and apply them every chance you get.
pick photographers carefully and focus on beauty glamor and commercial modeling. Anything else will be a waste of time.
Your money shot: listed
delete or replace with better face pic on this one (one eye is too dark)
and doesn't look good (hair problem)
keep it up, people shoot beg you to shoot with you. I know I would.

Thank you very much! What do you mean learning the ropes?

Hellen Makaryan wrote:
Thank you very much! What do you mean learning the ropes?

Learning the right ways, as good habits get's developed in early stages as well as bad habits. Work with as many photographers as you can. Network with other models.

Willum Lackey wrote:
Amazing idea, thank you in advance!
Also, reading back through these, the level of elaboration you give is wonderful!
What an excellent asset you are for everybody's growth!
Willum

You are so kind thank you.

Rays Fine Art wrote:
A positive thread in critiques?  Wow!

Yes please!

Yes it happens sometime

Yevgeniya Fedorov wrote:
I would love some advice and feedback

First impressions: Nice body of work, nothing earth shattering but nevertheless good quality and viable for portraiture and beauty.
Your Skill level: I would say beginner due to inconsistent quality of your finished product as far as I can see from photo to photo in your port. Your Photo shop techniques are sub standard.
Your money shot:
What I like: I wish depth of field and light was better
Your Creativity gage: neutral to sleepy mode.
Your Noteworthy Technique: natural light
Your Work focus: portraiture, mainstream model portfolios.
What I don't like: tight crop bad photoshop on nose
What to delete: bad low key  model meh look
Profile usefulness: not useful
Next Step: studio lighting must be improved, spend less then $1000 on Elinchrome D lites 400 joules 2 softbox kit, you will do wonders.
Verdict: Your direct competition does better.

Shay_Danielle  wrote:
I'm new but I would love some advice and a critique.

You double dipped but your turn has come
First impressions: Nice girl next door look, beautiful features.
Your Skill level: beginner.
Pluses: assertive attitude in front of the camera
Your money shot:
Your Work focus: no specific  pattern other then fun shoots.
What I like: pose expression and wardrobe
What to delete: mouth appears swell and hair in wrong spot
Profile usefulness: somewhat but emphasis on your own vision and goals and vision matters the most.
Next Step: shoot often and build skills
Verdict: Expect a tough competition, it will be a hard start.

Dadams Photography wrote:
I am interested!

First impressions:
Your Skill level: beginner amateur
Your money shot:
Your Work focus: appears as random but certainly indicates interest and diversity
What I like: demure look.
Next Step: Need to improve lighting techniques. Some black and white photos could be exposed and lighted better.
Verdict: try to network with more models and shoot a lot.

Angie Marie wrote:
Interested!

Model
First impressions: Unique and versatile looks in port.
Your Skill level: Intermediate to advanced
Minuses: no nude samples
Your money shot:
Challenges: pay attention to your poses and know your bad angles even if your photographer seem to ignore them (nostrils, not flattering- just 1 example)
Your Work focus: totally random other then figure art.
What I like: the"look" 
What to delete: taped boobs and anything low key or amateurish that often people equate wrongfully as "art" example of off beat ->   
Profile usefulness: Nudity part explanation is bothersome, no drama is needed. Better to discuss privately case by case basis.
Next Step: do some fashion shots to diversify.
Verdict: Creativity and spontaneity is observed but not sure if genuine
nothing to list.

Henry Westheim wrote:
If you're still going, I"d love to know.  Cheers!

Good for you for living in Asia. I started learning Korean 3 months ago and it is my 5th language. Love the culture

Photographer
First impressions: Outstanding Work
Your Skill level: advanced
Your money shot: listed
Your Noteworthy Technique: Like your hi key also general studio lighting
Your Work focus: omnidirectional
What I like: evidence of flawless posing intense! captivating!
What to delete: don't like the post and not as strong as the rest of the port.
Profile usefulness: Useful
Next Step: add sexy!
Verdict: Good mainstream job!

E_R_E_K_A wrote:

Model
First impressions: Great flexibility, highly marketable look. Big mouth personality. You marking non nude photos as +18 is very annoying.
belongs to photographer's port.
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your money shot: listed.
Your Work focus: All over.
What I like:
What to delete: tight crop on enormous hair job, you look annoyed, not a good low key either. Some part of hair looks badly edited.
Profile usefulness: Not useful, some parts come across as condescending obnoxious and arrogant e.g. THINGS TO KNOW:  section can be deleted all together.
Verdict: Overall good job.

Jordan LW wrote:
Im interested in hearing what you have to say, please and thank you!

Model
First impressions:
Your Skill level: Beginner with potential
Your money shot:
Challenges: posing
Your Work focus: limited to casual/fashion
What I like:
Bottom line: Need to shoot more.
Profile usefulness: somewhat useful
Verdict: You'll do fine, work on expressions and poses.

Kasey Lestrange MUA wrote:
I would absolutely love to hear your thoughts

Sorry I am not going to comment on MUA and retoucher/ digital artist ports.

Matt 333 wrote:
I suppose I'm in, too.

Very nice family oriented work.

Great job in general.
is nice but perhaps you could eliminate the light glare on the groom's hair.